Hmmmm... What should I use this space for? I don't know.
August 14th at 12:30 noon...
Time is trapped when a young stallion attempts at being the hero and trying to save the one he loves most dearly. But in doing so he kept pushing her into a worse death. So back he goes in time and tries to stop her from dying.
Added a teen tag with gore because it has quite a bit of blood in it.
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4861562 Thanks so much. I love seeing a kagerou fan once in a while
4865256 Well. I suppose his cutie mark would be... maybe a clock? Well cuz of the time stuff. Some cutie marks display a pony's destiny so maybe a clock. Yeah. As for appearance. A brownish mane and... a white coat? Im not sure... his eyes would be brown. Yeah I never really thought him through...
4866332 Sure I'll keep it in mind
4866568 Hmm, all right when I get hold of my laziness I will do it.
4871523 Okay
4916180 I am working on it but I have a disease called writers block
I had just fallen in love with the Kagerou Project just a few days ago and I came here to see if there was a crossover of some sort I could read. I found this and happened to be listening to the correlating song. I promptly restarted the song and began reading. That was quite the experience. I like how you explained the loop with Hibiya's time spell. Although I wouldn't make time his special talent. I would make it according to his eye power, his quite literal far-sighted-ness. It's often been described as "having a bird's eye view", so perhaps his cutie mark would be a bird. This could be fun if Hiyori had a cat cutie mark instead of the bracelets, to symbolize how he's prey to her beauty or something like that because cats eat birds. As for Hibiya's colors, I imagined him with brown eyes and hair, yes, but with light blue streaks in the mane and tail, along with the white coat. One last thing, I noticed a few grammar mistakes here and there, so remember to check your work more often. Thanks for the awesome fanfic!
4994305 thanks. Yeah I've made loads of grammar mistakes. I was just thinking on the top of my head when I was writing this. So alot of the things are wrong or could be better. Thanks for the comment