Both Spike and Sweetie Belle became vampires, now they must feed until Twilight can find a way to cure them. However, there is a deadline. If they aren't cured in three months, they will stay vampires forever.
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Me. I'm me. And me is someone I wanna be. I don't wanna be the me that want's to be me. I wanna be the me that doesn't wanna be the me the that want's to be me.
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Good start, the concept intrigues me!
4156561 Same here.
So far, awesome brau.
Where there's SpikeBelle, I will be there
Great story!
I wondered when someone would do this type of story.
4156787 Well, I got sick of waiting around. Someone had to do it, right?
Well that was great!! Please dont be one of thoughs those authers that wait for two months before uploading a new chapter.
4156927 I'll try not to be. But I was telling the truth when I said I'm lazy.
Well better then Twilight lol.
) I do want to see Spike (or Sweetie) try to fight another vampire for trying to flirt with their "friend" lol.
This seems like it will become a interesting story, if they start to develop more vampire powers as times goes one (and their lust for each other grows as well lol
Oh my! Twi shut that door!
..... HAHAHAHAHA!!!!! oh man I just peed alittle there. Well it is always nice when one doesn't beat around the bush and you just jumped in head first. I guess we are in for a funny chapter next time.
I hope it is full of fun
T. I CAN'T BELIEVE WHAT YOU TWO WHERE DOING!
Sp. Well what do you aspect when you lock two 16 alone in a basement and when one is a sexy mare like Sweetie?!
Sw. You think I am Sexy?
Sp. Didn't I just show i did *blush and a wink*
T. FOCUS!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT YOU GUYS ARE TOO YOUNG AND LITTLE TO BE DOING ANYTHING LIKE THAT!!!
Sw..... *Whisper (but not low enough)* Well I can tell you Spike isn't that small at all.
T........
lol
OH almost forgot.... STILL BETTER THEN TWILIGHT!!!!
Well that update came a lot quicker then I thought.
looks good
Three months? Think that's long enough, bro? Why not go "Supernatural" and make it a day? Hell, go further and do "30 Days of Night" and make the transformation a couple of hours.
This story could also be named after the movie "vampires suck." Think about it.
4158888 I didn't want to make this story to short. I was gonna go elder scrolls rules and make it three days, but three months just sounds better to me. That way I can have actual time if this turns out to be a long story, or I can make it short if my writer's block returns. For some reason, I can feel writer's block coming, and I can usually pump out a couple thousand words before it takes over.
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Ah. Well ether way, its an interesting story. I always pictured a Vampire kinda like the ones in "30 Days of Night". And as for the writers block, I know how that goes. I'm having a bit of trouble myself with my Assassin's Creed story I'm doing. Hope you pull through, bro!
Good chapter.
God. The references only make this great fic awesome. I love the lonely island
First and most important..... STILL BETTER THEN TWILIGHT!!!!
. It is done in a way it is a quick read that puts a smile on ones face without trying to be coverly complex or sexy. It knows what it is, It is like Scary movie with teenage vamps (And no not like that bad parody one that came out years ago lol
) For a starter story it isn't bad, it shows you have a talent for writing comedy and makes me interesting to see how you would handle writing a action (or action comedy) true shipping. I want to see more and more work from you since I feel you can really make great content if you keep at it.
Now that that is done, I do have to say I enjoy your writing
Ha, good chapter. We got to hear alot more about your Spike and Sweetie relationship as well as Spike's nature as well (Which I feel might come into play later on). I find it funny that they were like make out when we all know they will do more then that. I hope Twi comes home and she goes to her room to look for them and they made a "mess" all over her bed. Or she (or for more drama have it be Rarity coming back to try to get more help finding Sweetie) walks in and hear Sweetie shouting some very "colorful things"
4180266 I imagine Rarity being jealous.
4180305 That all depends on what you would have Sweetie yelling when she walks in lol. But jealous Rarity is always a great thing (you know not counting that one story she went all crazy from it lol)
4180314 Oh the things I would have Sweetie scream! *rubs end of cliche evil villain mustache*
4180337 And comments like that is why I stick around lol
looks good
I know I going be hated for this, but you could combine the chapters to make it one chapter....other then that, I love the story.
4180871 I know short chapters aren't for everyone. Sorry, but If I do that, it will have so many horizontal lines that people will think I have a fetish for them. I guess I could do like a Stephen King thing, and have chapters contain their own chapters. But I don't know how many people would like that.
4181222 IDK I have gotten use to the short chapter style for this story. I don't take this as one of those stories with very deep and complicated plots (at leas as of right now). I see this as a story I read when I need a good laugh. Now I am not saying this couldn't be done over in a more serious style. But I enjoy the silly and comical style of this story, and I feel the short chapter format keep it where we get our laughs and less stress on the writer so we can get content at a steady pace.
I JUST HAD SEEEX!~
AND IT FELT SO GOOD!~
RUN!!!!!! Lol but still great chapter. I hope we get a awkward morning with all of them lol. I still want to hear sweetie say some random thing how good spike was just to see how twi react. Oh you have to have them sitting around watch pony twilight lol that would be so funny
I liked this, awkward and fun, I love it!
Twilight: What are you two doing in here
Spike:
Sweetiebelle:
Twilight:
I can see I'm not the only one with Pinkie issues. Keep writing.
anybody else thinking twilight wants to join in on the sexy funtimes?
if so raise your hoof
0.0
Pfft...
run mate Ill distract her!
*1 minute later*
aww..crap.(tackled and hog tied by pinkie with a piece of licorice)
guys ? she's giving me bedroom eyes
4330104 You're on your own comrade!
How long until the next one
oh my
I am sorry to hear that dude. But I am happy to have you back and see you are writing again. You have to stop by and check out my story. Since you been gone I started my own. Anyway I can't wait to see what you have in store for your two love bats here. STILL A BETTER LOVE STORY THEN TWILIGHT!!!
4466271 It's good to be back yo. Just hope I can stay away from all the creepers in the fandom.
4466279 Ha. Just blow them off and focus on the good. Since you been gone SOOO many epic stories have come out (mine included lol
) you have alot of catching up to do .lol.
4466286 I feel like a hermit that just came out of his house after three years. I can't wait to read these stories you speak of, and I'll definitely check yours out if I think it will interest me!
pretty good work kid
I enjoyed this fic since it took a whole new outlook on the Sweetie x Spike shipping.
I am sorry to hear about your falling out from the fandom
despite the ending looking rushed, there was still some kind of an ending.
Criteria
Spelling: Last I time I read this fic there no errors 10/10
grammar: few errors here and there but not bad.9/10
pacing: I will acknowledge the rushed ending 9/10
characters: a little OOC, I really don't know since I have only seen a few episodes but have read countless fics 8/10
score 18/20
prize A panther tank and a brownie
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if you ever write another story and want have someone edit for just PM me
4485367 Thanks. I just really wanted to complete it. If I ever write another story I'll be sure to take my time with it. I'll be sure to think about that offer. Having an editor would make things a lot easier. I just mainly do everything myself, and that's why it's all over the place most of the time.
4485396 oh don't worry mate. I enjoyed this and bury me in your heart. both of these I found to be a pleasant read. I have seen stories that made me say WTF?1 NO!! to jaw dropping, pulse pounding great stories that I rated 11/10 on my scale.
the lowest I ever gave was a 5/10 and that was because I give every one I read an automatic 5/10 for just posting and creating the fic. the rest I figure from reading the story.
awww. it's over already.
4485743 Sorry man! Maybe I'll do another story like it someday, when I'm a better writer!