Well, I'm loving the work so far. Swift is chipper, Midnight is hilarious. Although I can't help but wonder what Blaze's game is. He's obviously crazy and wants to exterminate the thestrals (batponies), but what does he gain from all this? (On a separate note: I think calm crazies are scarier than outlandish ones; Joker being the exception)
Well look at that. Four chapters in and we've got the opening picture down. I expected another 3 chapters before that. Just means we're progressing faster than I expected. Which brings up a point I may have made earlier, too lazy to check; we seem to be progressing pretty fast, your pacing is all over the place. Not necessarily a terrible thing but it can be jaring from time to time. Not that I can complain though, it is certainly setting a strange feeling around the story that I can't quite explain but do like. Also, Tyl no D: (I think its a "past time" not a "pass time", though) Damn, Blaze is... Something else. Which really creates a disparity when we've got the hijinks of Night and Swift, I love it.
Well, I'm loving the work so far. Swift is chipper, Midnight is hilarious. Although I can't help but wonder what Blaze's game is. He's obviously crazy and wants to exterminate the thestrals (batponies), but what does he gain from all this? (On a separate note: I think calm crazies are scarier than outlandish ones; Joker being the exception)
Well look at that. Four chapters in and we've got the opening picture down. I expected another 3 chapters before that. Just means we're progressing faster than I expected.
Which brings up a point I may have made earlier, too lazy to check; we seem to be progressing pretty fast, your pacing is all over the place. Not necessarily a terrible thing but it can be jaring from time to time. Not that I can complain though, it is certainly setting a strange feeling around the story that I can't quite explain but do like.
Also, Tyl no D: (I think its a "past time" not a "pass time", though)
Damn, Blaze is... Something else. Which really creates a disparity when we've got the hijinks of Night and Swift, I love it.