The curious tale of Zapple Dapple, a pegasus foal who wakes up one day and decides to have a grand adventure, seeing what the town has to offer, tasting the local flavours, going for a swim, visiting a library, and meeting royalty.
He has a fantastic day.
OH MY GOSH THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOOO ADORABLE
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D'aw, thank you.
"Electro-boop!"
Greatest thing I've read in a while! Zapple is adorable!
A bit part isn't enough to put this in Protect Celestia.
4146622 Does it say complete? No?
Bit part eh? Harrumph.
4146648 That and playing her OOC for the sake of drama already has me thinking this story isn't what we want in the group.
4146656 Maybe you should write this. You know SO much about what is going on. Clearly.
4146665 I'm not the writer, just the guys who checks what goes into the group. Your story does not cut it as it currently is.
OH MY GOSH THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO ADORABLE AND I LOVED IT!
I wish this story had a bit more attention.
O.K. This is great already. I think my favorite part is the 'elecro-boop'. Either that or Key Lime.
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I like how this ended. Zapple Dapple becoming Celestia's guard and marrying Key Lime.
You seem to be missing a 'he' in there.
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Ugh. I hate when that happens. Thanks.
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Spoilers, bro.
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I should fix that shouldn't I?
4405491
No 's' in spoiler tag.
4405503
Fixed!
This is in serious need of love.
Thinking about that phrase, is there some kind of "needs more love" image? I dont think I have seen anything of the sort around...
Anyways, I liked the fic, although we didnt get to know what happened about the orphanage... but Celestia got her answer. A cruel enviroment spawns a "bad foal".
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Thank you so much for giving this some of the love it deserves.
Ahh. Another good fic with Celestia in disguise. Sweet relief.
Kudzuhaiku stop killing me!! I have now aquire 11 variations of diabetes, one for each "section" in the story... MY HEART
4182482 I wish it did too. This a cute, well written, and thought provoking story that more people should take the time to read. I love stories like this. Stories that give bitter philosophical questions sweet candy coatings are hard to come by.
Finally found time to read this. Such a sweet story. And hilarious in the first chapter.
I'm glad I found such a cute story
Good story so far, just sad to think places like that can be so horrible, I'd adopt a foal or 10 just to get them away from that.
Zapple Dapple always was a good foal ta me, poor kid just needed help and love.