Everypony in Cheerilee's class has a few secrets that they'll take to the grave with them. Many of them are usual gossip worthy secrets, however, there's one secret that the two most powerful fillies have never told anypony, not even the CMC.
One night, Sweetie Belle is invited around to Diamond's house for what she thinks is an apology. However, what she discovers, could make or break Diamond and Silver's lives forever.
Not even Sweetie could see this coming.
There will be Age-Play involved in this story. Do not read if you hate any of the following:
Diapers
Foalish Things
Diamond Tiara and/or Silver Spoon
Age-Play
You have been warned.
Chapters (1)
Pretty good, a little 'meh' at parts but for your first Age Play fic you did fine.
Can I shoot something yet? Sorry, not the fanfic I wanna shoot, mostly the ridiculousness of that pic.
no characters in this list can be considered 'mighty'.....
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bitch Diamond Tiara is mighty as fuck
4148496 mighty bitch maybe , but i don't count that.....
4148508
yes but that is my fetish
4148518 lelk....
4148523
Nothing like a nice narcissistic, self-centered mare to teach all those pheasant school fillies their fucking place
oh yes she'd fucking show them all
I agree with superpinkbrony, pretty good
4148529 wait but isn't the fic about the narcissist getting put down?....
4148541
I dunno I haven't even read it XDDDDDDDDXDXXDXD
4148552 oh , didn't even realize i wasn't talking to the author lol.....
4148559
top lel
4148463 I got this pic from the leader of Padded Ponies and Adult Foals. Oliver-England himself.
He has a Deviantart account with the same name.
4148529 peasant doesn't have H in it and I hope you're not calling them pidgeons.
Good story... A bit out of character... And if the foals tounge lasts for a day.... Wouldn't they still be talking like foals at school? Also a possible epilogue/sequel that scootaloo and apple bloom follow sweetie belle one day to diamond tiaras mansion, and they find out.
Otherwise. Other than the extreme out of characterness, its great for your first age play fic
4150321 it's not a 24 hour thing like most other things I've read.
It did say until tomorrow.
4151259 that's true.... But I still see this out of character for diamond tiara.. she doesn't seem worried at all...
4152899 it's like I wrote, she and Silver kept it secret for too long. I made it so that she would take all the weight off by telling one other pony, Sweetie Belle, and as such, she thought that she would be at ease since Sweetie Pinkie Promised not to tell anypony.
I didn't want to say fanfic powers, because the last time I did, I had to tear down a fic the second it was published.
i agree with SuperPinkBrony12.
there were a few meh moments, but they were barely noticeable.
this was a cute little fic and i liked it. a definite like
It was pretty good. Some of the commenters are saying that there were holes in the story, and it was out of character for dt ans ss, and after looking back, I will admit, at least to some extent, this is true, but honestly, when fanfics do this, I barely notice. For some reason, that kind of thing doesn't bother me. I liked this story. It wasn't the best padded pony fic I've read, but it was up there. Please consider making more.
good first try. would like to see a sequal with the rest of the cmc. If they are true friends they'll understand.
This story needs something. I know a sequel
The scribe is pleased FOR NOW
SEQUEL REQUIERED
4612941 I'm working on it. But I have other fics to attend to as well.
Poor Sweetie belle. She is scarred for life.
well that aint at all creepy in the least
so what is that supposed to be baby proofing the tiara like trying to keep Diamond and Silver from poking their eyes out with it?
4612945 your princess orders you to continue
Definitely a MUST CONTINUE!
assuming makes an a** out of you and me
As has already been said multiple times, there needs to be a sequel to this, like maybe Rarity or the other Crusaders find out. Why isn't there a sequel to this?
Wow. Do people really hate Diamond and Silver so much you actually had to include that in the warnings?
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Exactly!
I agree with gamer luna YOU MUST CONTINUE WORKING ON THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
8482384 Agreed!