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nanashi_jones


"Perhaps the story now goes beyond the book." - Cornelia Funke, Inkheart

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Pinkie Pie's friend, Snuggles, is only the coolest pony ever!

He gives the best hugs, and he's sweet, and gives the best hugs, and he's friendly, and gives the best hugs, and he really is such a great stallion! Also, did Pinkie mention the hugs?

Pinkie's friends quickly figure out she appreciates Snuggles for more than just his hugs. The Party Pony, Pinkie, has a crush. Unfortunately, Pinkie has never had a crush before. Does her crush like her back? What do you do with a crush? Why is it called a crush when it feels more like a squish?

Maybe she needs some help from her friends. Just in case. After all, nopony's ever gotten hurt with a crush? Right? ...Right?

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This was so awesome and definitely needs more views and likes!! I guess it is because everypony cannot sit an read a 7-thousand some story in one sitting but I sure could, this time! It was so interesting and everything about the characters was probably as close to perfect as it anything could get!! Excellent work with this one!! :pinkiehappy: :heart:

xXElite AlicornXx

Wait a minute...you're the one who wrote Scootaloo, Where Are Your Parents?
Oh. That makes sense. I usually have very low expectations for the new stories, but this one surpassed my expectations. Cool, I've finally been a member of FimFiction for long enough to where I start seeing people I know.
I liked it! :pinkiehappy: This was a very good story idea, since most people can relate to the feeling of a crush, and especially THAT moment when you realize you actually have a crush on a guy/girl. :twilightblush:
I might check out some of your other stories.
Ooh, The Secret Life of Fluttershy...clicks on it

This was adorable, there needs to be more Pinkie romance like this.

Obviously, the solution is for Pinkie to start crushing on a certain classy unicorn instead. :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

...welp.

Shipping wars ahoy, I guess.

Daw... that was nice. Feels like it could have even worked as an episode!

Well that's just adorable :pinkiehappy:

This fanfic does something really special that not nearly enough fics even attempt: Create an episode. The comedy, premise, character interaction, moral message, and even the journal entry at the end all feel like something that could really happen in the show, which is something I wish more pony fics offered.

Also, just for the sake of my imagination, what does Snuggle's cutie mark look like? I've been imagining a teddy bear, but if you had something different in mind, I'd love to know what it is.

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Thanks! That's what I shooting for so I'm glad it hit the mark for you! :pinkiehappy:

As for Snuggles's cutie mark- It's a pair of hearts squished against one another.

I'm very excited to see more episode style fics around!
But I didn't read it. At least not yet. I'm uncomfortable with romance type things, and even though this doesn't have a romance tag, it's been described as such in some of the other comments and it is about crushes.

So I guess my point is. You've written an exciting short and long description that I almost read. But then I didn't read because of personal reasons.

*Clicks the Like button anyway.*

This. Is. Awesome. This was the very best characterization of Pinkie I've ever seen. I can definitely imagine Pinkie Pie acting like this. Very convenient because this applies to me right now.:applejackconfused:I'm glad this reminded me of a very important lesson!!!:heart:
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Wow, this is EASILY one of my favorite one-shot fics I've ever read. Great writing, great pacing, great moral, and a great depiction of the characters!

I love Pinkie Pie romance stories simply because of how differently she thinks about everything. You did an amazing job of bringing her thoughts to life!

You got Pinkie's voice perfectly! Not an easy thing.:pinkiehappy:

Mach 3.14 ................... :pinkiecrazy:

4501869 Ya dun stole my comment! xD I the only idealistic-yet-mildly-romantically-insecure intellectual around these parts. :P

But seriously, Mr. Author Dude, I conceptually support this fic and its awesomeness so much that besides faving and liking it, I might even read it. I mean, I probably will. Yup :3

Pinkie at her super cutest. Nice.

Awwww.... so sad. :yay:

Neat story.
It would have been better without the homosexuality, though.

Nice. I especially liked that it didn't go the Snazzy Pinkie route of having everything fall into place (read: end in romance) by the end.

One little nitpick: Rarity refers to Snuggles as a "masseuse" once. That's the feminine form of the word (the male would be "masseur"), and it threw me off a little, because I thought at first that I'd misread previous text suggesting that Snuggles was a guy.

I found this story to be cute, charming, and humorous; with excellent depictions of Pinkie Pie, Rarity, and Gummy. Kudos!

Up-voted and favourited! :pinkiehappy: :raritystarry:

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Thanks for the heads up! I'll make the adjustment.

Eyes wide, she jerked in place, laughed shrilly, then ran off at Pinkie Mach 3.14.

Ah yes, she does tend to move at the speed of Pi (yes, I saw what you did there). Great little story you've got here! Have a fave and upvote!

This was amazing. It's perfectly in keeping with the show, the characterisations were spot-on, and the whole thing left me with the warm fuzzies. Excellent work.

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Shipping wars ahoy, I guess.

Shipping wars?

More like a full-on naval battle.

Your writing for Pinkie was simply adorable. Great work!:pinkiehappy:

This was awesome! Very well written and engaging. In the end, no one is really happy, but Pinkie does learn a very important lesson.

Greenthumbed!

From the description, I was half expecting Snuggles to be a giant python. :twilightsmile:

That was incredibly adorable. <3

Aaww, that was the sweetest thing i read in a long while and I just wanna huggle someone now. You wanna know something sad though, it was because my crush a while back cuddled and hugged me really nice like and played with my hair that I sort of fell for her then stuff got real exciting, and then it ended in heartbreak. </3
Was bound to happen, cause she... kinda... had someone else at the time... *Coughs*

Anywho, this was a super cute fic and I really enjoyed it! The narrative was very much Pinkie Pie style and the other characters seemed to be in perfect character. I enjoyed the frozen Pinkie scene and Twilight's sarcasm. Hehe. I loved imaging Pinkie having all of those conflicting feelings and getting shy even. I dunno, sad/shy Pinkie if done right can be really cool. But only if done right, and in moderation, as too much of a sad thing can be bleh. She's the element of laughter, so, of course we've gotta always love happy Pinkie, and here I am rambling. woopsie!

Quaver Ava

“Ooo! That was at least an seven!” Pinkie said, after the hug ended.

I think you might need an 'a' there instead of the 'an'.

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Fixed. Thank you! It's always the little things that get missed.

This is gonna be a good one.

Pinkie snorted. “Pfff, I couldn’t be a changeling, Rarity. Then I wouldn’t know about how at your Cuteciñera you rushed the cake so fast you-”

I really do love these stories that imply the Mane 6 knew each other as foals.

I really felt for Pinkie. Well done.

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