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Bakmah Genesis


Insanity is only those of the vivid imagination

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Octavia Philamonica has always had a nice, quiet life in Canterlot. After getting attacked and gravely injured by unnatural beings, a dark figure comes to her rescue, but there was a catch. She was warned, but she took it anyways. Now the calm, collected Octaiva is now a Vampony and works for a secret organization ran by the princess of the night made to track and kill dangerous monsters along side other Vamponies and Ponies.

As she follows around her master, a one Fluttershy, she slowly learns how to give up her old Pony ways and to embrace her new, darker powers as a Vampony.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 75 )

Interesting. Octavia, gotta be more careful... and too late on that account.

I like this idea but it needs a bit more minor editing to get the idea across as well as clarify some parts, I had problems telling who was talking at certain parts and also I had to wonder several times if it was anthro or regular ponies. (Regardless of the tags it sounded like just ponies at times, also spelling errors but those are a given most of the time.) Overall it sounds good so far, keep up the good work.

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Yeah, I would have out up a thing in OEE or any other editing group if knighty ever fixed that group thread notification thing.

4131309 Yeah no more thread notifications is screwing me in the arse as well, at the least I would try to get an editor for you fics, I personally suggest Cerulean Voice he is on this site and does some decent editing work. Hopefully this little bit of constructive criticism from a fourteen year old helped out a bit.:rainbowlaugh:

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Pfft. I'm 16 and I give better advice to my elders than people the same age as them can sometimes.

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Considering I'm basing her off Sersa from Hellsing Ultimate for this fic, she won't be very careful...

4131344 Seems to be the same here, I feel a bit naive amongst the people on this site I try to help however since I've never actually finished a pony fic yet. (Which is extremely depressing.) So I feel like I don't know squat about it but I try to help anyway.:twilightblush:

4131360 Ah. Admittedly, never watched anything Hellsing-related. So I'll have to take your word on that. ;) But it should lead to some interesting situations. :D

This sounds interesting. I will read this at some point, of that I can assure you

4131360 After reading the description I was kind of wondering if there were Helsing influences on this story. Now I know... and now I read!

Okay, I'm interested enough to follow this.

15+ minutes between when I hit publish to it actually updating...

I like this sexy, badass Fluttershy.

and now the curiosity creeps in wondering what happened to the rest of Twi's friends... Curse you and your wonderful style of writing that keeps me wanting more.

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Exactly. She is anime dream.

So, the Mane Six are all vamponies now? How many of them are agents? Anyway, I look forward to more sexy vampony goodness. And please finish this story.

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I will. At least I have an anime to refer to if I run out of inspiration for this one. :raritywink: and an abridged version even. :yay:

I rather like this Flutters. :D The others are vamponies, too. Nice job with that bat spell, Twilight. :twilightblush: Great chapter.

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The first time was bad enough but creating a Vampony, Twilight DOES need to go back to magic kindergarten.

So,sort of like children of the night,but bat ponies?:trixieshiftright:

I LOVE IT:heart::ajsmug:

i see a typo

It also tastes nasty to use

I think us is what you meant to type

keep it up:pinkiecrazy:

I got to say, this is a amazing story and well written with only one typo and that was in the beginning which I already arrested with a comment

i know its not a crossover but did this idea come from hellsing ultimate?

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I got inspired to write a Vampony fic from that, bit no.

So now Vinyl is joining the fray...okay. I guess now would be a good time to show Octavia how to use that gun and how to aim it. I wonder where Octavia will be working now? In one workplace, she opened fire at one of her co-workers and in another, her boss was bit by a werewolf.

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Berry will take over. while Vinyl is treated. Se still works in the Café and night club.

This is absolutely amazing! Keep up the work and try not to take too long with updating it!...I mean if you want to cause its really up to you if you update for or not...just know that it would be nice if you would be fast about it.

Yeah, definitely gonna be a good idea for Octy to get a bit more than a glance at the gun this time around. Hope Berry's alright, too. Good action to the end, there.

Aw... and here I was hoping Vinyl would get to be a vampire again... Oh well! Now Vinyl can have the illustrious title of, "Best Werewolf." or at least most musically inclined werewolf...

Nice! Very nice!

Man, there needs to be mor vampire pony fics and fast

If there are more, any suggestions?

awesome story….but do you accept OC's?

No spelling errors that I see I think vanpony Octavia would be asom to look at her. Its easy to imagen her with red eyes with Gray and black fur coat.

This is a well written and seems that they have good legitimated organization in the underworldfc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/363/0/d/flutterbat_by_high_roller2108-d6zwqzt.png because of cute

4509753 ....Looking at your spelling, it's obvious why you didn't spot any errors in spelling.

4798851 can't deny that
Don't have glasses with me

cautiously watching this.

"They are what happen when non-virgins are bit by a Vampony.

Noooo that means no vampony vinyl... unless this is one of those weird fics where vinyl and octavia have a role reversal...hmmm

Comment posted by Retiredwriter deleted Jul 23rd, 2015
Comment posted by Retiredwriter deleted Jul 23rd, 2015
Comment posted by Retiredwriter deleted Jul 23rd, 2015

>>Frankie2 Actully Fluttershy converted all of the Mane Six into vampires ecluding Twilight. As it was clearly stated that Rainbow Dash was the last one to be converted.

Sorry for the spam I though My comment wasn't posting.

>>Bakmah Genesis I have three things to ask you 1: If and when Fluttershy meets her former friends will they harbor ill-will agaisent her, 2: Will some of the people Octavia and Fluttershy meet that know of Fluttershy's past try to belittle her for change in personality,
3: Have you read my comment in A Lost Moon?

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Well, there may be some form of ill-wil, but not a huge conflicting matter. Rainbow Dash is probably the first to forgive Flutters mostly of the fact that they are related. On how others who know of what Fluttershy had done, I will say that that bridge will come up sooner or later. :ajsmug:

And yes, I have read thy comment

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