The Legend of Zelda?: Ocarina of Time

by Swirl

Chapter 1: Summoned

“Navi, Navi? Where are you?”

“I’m right here! Can’t you see me Great Deku Tree?” Navi wondered.
“No. I don’t have eyes. I am just a tree. Well anyways, I need you to go get the pony without a fairy,” the Great Deku Tree said.

“Why?”

“Because I think that I’m gonna die soon, so just go and hurry back!”

“Fine,” Navi said, and then she took off.

So, Navi flew through Kokori to a small tree house of a young alicorn with white fur, a red mane with black stripes (and a matching tail), the tip of her horn, ears, hooves, and the base of her tail were burgundy, and she had a green tunic and hat on, who was apparently asleep and snoring loudly; Navi thought this would be easy. She has never been more wrong.

“Hey! Hey! Swirl! Wake up!” Navi commanded.

“Huh... why?” Swirl said, sleepily.

“Get Up!”

“Ugh…”

“Grrr! WAKE UP!!! THE FATE OF THE WORLD CAN’T LIE IN THE HOOVES OF SUCH A LAZY PONY!!!!!!!!”

“Aggh!” Swirl said, falling out of her bed with a thump.

“Finally!”

“WHAT? WHAT DO YOU WANT? WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO WAKE ME UP LIKE THAT?”

“Uhh… The Great Deku Tree summoned you, so let’s go!”

“Can’t you get someone else to do it?”

“I said he summoned YOU! So come on!”

“What makes you think the Great Deku Tree is a boy?”

“What does that have to do with anything?”

“Whatever. Well, you comin’?” Swirl said, walking out the door.

“Ignoramus,” Navi said under her breath.

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Swirl walked out of her tree house and took a deep breath. She could smell the trees, the flowers, the fresh dew on the grass, and the animals. Apparently, everypony was out enjoying the beautiful day. “I just love days like this! These are the days that I am glad I live in Kokori Forest! Huh, is that…”

“Hey Swirl!” Swirl was interrupted by a red pegasus with a blue and white mane that came running up to the bottom of the ladder, “Finally decided to come out of that tree house I see!”

“Oh, hey Flash. “ Swirl said climbing down the ladder, “What have you been up to?”

“Just practicing my flying. I’m having a race with Flap at the end of the week.”

“Cool! I’ll go watch. I would race with ya’ll, but remember, I broke a wing, so I can’t fly fast. Good luck though!”

“Thanks! How is your wing doing anyway?”

“Better since you helped bandage it up.”

“That’s a relief! I was starting to worry that I might have one less competitor!”

“Oh Really? I always beat you in races in the past, so the only thing stoppin’ me now is a broke wing!”

“That’s just ‘cause you always used magic to slow me down, speed you up, or both! Oh well. Hey is that a fairy? It’s ‘bout time you got one!”

“Yup! This fairy said the Great Deku Tree summoned me! Well, I gotta go! I’ll see ya later!”

“Okay! See yo… wait what? The Great Deku Tree summoned you? That’s great! Well you better get going, Swirl! Don’t want to be late!”

“Yeah, I know. See ya!”

“Bye!”

Swirl started walking to the meadow of the Great Deku Tree when she was stopped by a light green unicorn with a white mane. She tried to walk past her, but the unicorn created a force field around the entrance. Swirl tried to use her magic to nock it down, but it didn’t work because she couldn’t concentrate ‘cause she was so tired.

“What’s your problem Swift? I am trying to get to the Great Deku Tree!” Swirl exclaimed.

“What, you can’t nock down a simple force field? I thought you were ‘the most powerful alicorn in Kokori Forest’!” Swift mocked.

“Grrr! Nock down the stinkin’ force field NOW!!”

“Make me.”

“The Great Deku Tree summoned me! Now MOVE the buckin' force field!”

“I said, make me. I, the great Swift, will not be told what to do. Anyway, I won’t move myself OR the force field until you are at least equipped with a sword and a shield, because the forest has been getting more dangerous lately; monsters popping up just about everywhere After all, you can’t even control your magic, let alone destroy a monster; that is why you need a sword and shield!”

Swirl was angry about Swift’s remark, but she new it was true. She couldn’t control her magic; her emotions did. “Ugh! You are impossible!” she said, storming off.

Swirl hopped across the stepping stones on the pond, so angry her magic made her glow a bright red. As she walked, her hooves made the grass scorch a little. Everypony that she walked by stared at her; she could hear them whispering about how weird she was. That made her think about how she's been an outcast her whole life to the Kokori, but there was one pony who accepted her, he was even her best friend. Then, Swirl looked over and saw him running up to her and he said, “Swirl, are you alright? How did it go with the Great Deku Tree?”

“Huh, oh hey Flash. Yeah, um, that stupid Swift stopped me and wouldn’t let me pass. She said, and I quote ‘I won’t move until you are at least equipped with a sword and a shield, because the forest has been getting more dangerous’,”Swirl replied.

“How rude. Well she is right though. There have been more monsters around lately.”

“So, do you know where to find a sword and a shield?”

“Well, there is a shield on sale at the shop, and there is a sword hidden somewhere in the forest. I have no idea where the sword could be though, sorry.”

“Guess that means that I’ll have to work twice as hard!”

“I could help you find it.”

"Mmkay! Thanks!"

“Well I am going to the shop to buy that shield!” And with that, she left. She jumped over the fence and walked across the stream. [i‘Well, there it is she thought.

"Hey!"

"What was that?" Swirl wondered.

"Hey! Listen!"

"Okay, that is getting kinda annoying."

"SWIRL!!!!! Did you foret about me or something?!?" Navi said angrily.

"Huh... Oh, it's you. I forgot you were there. You didn't have to yell like that."

"Yes I did! you NEED to get to the Great Deku Tree NOW!"

"Were you not here the past 30 minutes? D you not "

"Uh... Did I tell you my name yet? It's Navi."

"Oh-kay. I need to buy a shield here. Let's go." Swirl said, walking into the building.

Meh... more 2 come l8r

Comments

[Iambrony]

Rushed.

Too rushed.

[Nero35]

There Is Such a Thing as Too many Referances.
Even though this is a Crossover, You Might Give the Forest or GDT a new name.
Great story though.

[Silver Sea]

This is very good.
Navi is a bit ruder than usual.
But still very good.
What will you do about Epona?

[SkyStream]

376483

He's gonna make a Human version of Epona of course

[Silver Sea]

376579
That's a very strange graphic.

[SkyStream]

376602

Sorry bout the pic, I didn't even think while writing that so I had no problem NOT imagining XD

[Hungrybear]

i.imgur.com/1yPbS.png

[Lunafan1k]

376658 lol indeed. replace link with Lyra, boom. instant crossover classic.

[Lunafan1k]

376658 ok for reals im actually onto something and am making a prologue right bucking now. btw i failed to find my own copy of Lyra Link in my folder with 3000 pony pics so i used the one u posted.

[Hungrybear]

377208
I don't mind, I actually posted the image just to see if the author if this story wanted to use it for his cover image, But it giving you a spark of inspiration is also nice. looking forward to your creation

[Smatexas]

Deku tree, Y U TALK SO MODERN

[TheRealShadowFoot]

got this same idea at 4am, but you beat me to it. I like it and hope to see more.

[GlitchyProductions]

Isn't there like four other Zelda related stories on this website, I'd hate to say this, but most of the other Zelda stories that relate to Ocarina of Time are better than this story. It's too rushed and there is no back-story or at least a little slice of life with the other Kokiri characters. (That's if you name them Kokiri instead of something else.)

[Swirl]

377406 I didn't know that, i was playing this game 4 the 3ds, and i wanted to make a pony version of it.

[Swirl]

377217 I ain't real good @ makin old style talkin

[Swirl]

376455 it took me a week to get what little i have now

[Spireon]

Good job, can't wait 4 more!

[TheEasterNacho]

377750 Yeah me to!

[GlitchyProductions]

377718

With great nostalgic video games such as Doom, Mario Bros., Zelda, Pac-Man and all sorts of Arcade and 80's and 90's classics.

People have VERY HIGH expectations when it comes to making a cross-over of peoples favourite child-hood videogames, and most people expect the writer to pull it off perfectly while making the story. All I can really say is that you should take your time in writing the upcoming chapters and try to jot down or note any new ideas that you have for the series. If you rush the story and make it look like rubbish then people will easily point out the mistakes and flood your inbox, yadda, yadda, yadda.

Good luck.

[Swirl]

378367 Thanks... i'll remember that 4 the next chapter and so on.

[Vestasam568]

376658 that pic fits perfectly for skyward sword