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Hajimebrony


Pretty recently became a brony and am grateful to the power of the ponies that have broken a LONG standing writer's block!

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Based in the magical land of Equestria, our story revolves around a young alicorn named Luna, who lives in the Kokiri Village. She was always different from the other ponies and when she is thrust into the position of hero, she will embark on a journey to save Equestria from the darkness that threatens it.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 31 )

Hmm... A Legend of Zelda crossover... Let's see how this plays out... Tread carefully friend.

11186 I hope you enjoy it, been a long while since I've had others read something I've written. :unsuresweetie:

:ajbemused:Just read it...:applejackunsure:

(Assuming that it's an Orcarina of Time crossover)
Luna as link: It's good, the (second) best pony mixed with the best video game character. :twilightsmile:
Fluttershy as Saria (I think): It's a good mix but I gathered that Fluttershy has no wings...:fluttershyouch:
Angel as The great Mido: (First thought):rainbowhuh::rainbowderp::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh: Brilliant!

It's good for a 5 year block man.

11189 yes, you guessed right about Fluttershy, didn't realize I forgot to point that out. I plan on switching around some general traits of certain ponies, just to make things interesting. Also, glad you liked the Angel idea, first time it popped into my head I had the same first thoughts. :pinkiehappy:

Don't exactly know who Cheerilee is though:rainbowhuh:

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It's really good so far.:twilightsmile:Hope to see more soon.

11191 Cheerilee's character is based on the Kokiri that teaches Link how to fight with his sword, I just decided to give the random bit character a personality and more of a role. She's going to be having a more important role in Chap. 2

11192

So is it an 'Orcarina of Time' Crossover?:rainbowhuh:

11193 Yeah, it's an ocarina of time crossover, I just couldn't come up with a decent name to tack onto Legend of Luna that satisfied me. :twilightoops:

11195 What about;

The Legend of Luna: Orcarina of Friendship?:rainbowderp:

That's..............:pinkiehappy: FANTASTIC...........why didn't I think of that :trixieshiftright:

Firsht!!

This is an overall excellent story! Great melding with the story, and an excellent mix of character... Nicely done.:twilightsmile: You've achieved my approval.:ajsmug:

I love the way you handled the inventory for 2 reasons. Number 1 is Link could only ever really have 1 thing actively equipped in his hands at any one time. The other is that there was a limited inventory in ocarina of time, if I remember my games correctly, so the charm bracelet is an elegant solution...because saddlebags are awkward. :yay:

12235 Thank you kindly for your approval. I was nervous beyond belief when I was submitting the story so I'm glad that at least one person enjoys it. That's enough reason alone to keep working at it. The next chapter will be more battle oriented and is looking a little longer so far so it might take a little more time. :rainbowdetermined2:

12389 Thanks for the input on the bracelet. I was worried for a minute that I hadn't properly explained it. :pinkiehappy:

This is pretty good! Can't wait for the next part! Definately tracking this one.

Not a bad start. Needs more chapters already though! :flutterrage:

Quick update everyone!! The new chapter is finished! However, I promised my friend that he would always be the first to read my chapters. Not just promised, but Pinky promised. :pinkiegasp: And I, for one, do not want to break one of those. :pinkiecrazy: The chapter will be in the mail by the end of the day, so I should be able to upload it here by Monday. :yay: I thank you all for your patience. The wait is just about over. :ajsmug::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::raritystarry::twilightsmile::yay:

Im only here because of the cover image
You may want to find a better picture to explain the one you have now is a Warhammer: 40000 Space marine My little pony Aquila
Just a thought

Super sword launcher go!

225608 I hope that wasn't too 'out there'. I wanted to go with the feeling of just a little filly who had started to get a big head but was then brought back to earth PRETTY quick. And, the way I thought it, a kid staring her own impending death in the face would just FREAK OUT and throw the closest thing to her at it. It just happened to have been her dropped sword. I hope you all liked the chapter. :pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::raritywink::twilightblush: I didn't know if people would like how I switched the ghomas with little ursa minor monsters.

And now I send out a question to the brony community. Who do you all think are the 3 most important people behind My Little Pony?

227477 ...

Super closest object to the little filly witch is a sword desperation attack launcher go!

... I liked the first one better... Still, it was very Kick Ass...

228547 :rainbowlaugh: okay yeah, first one sounds better. :derpytongue2:

I do enjoy this story, but I do not fully agree with your character choices. If you don't mind, I would like to write one of my own. Only one question, who should be Link? Dr.Whooves or Soarin. I really can't decide.:facehoof:

Need a majoras mask fanfic!

332731 actually, one is planned once I manage to work my way through this one. Legend of Luna: Discord's Mask :rainbowdetermined2:

Good reaction to the boss fight frist you think know how to beat it then its mean and almost kills you.:flutterrage:
The joy of the game but I love it.
Can't wait for next chapter.

5467295 I am in the middle of rewriting the currrent chapters and continuing the story. I just feel i lost connection to it with how long it's been but i certainly don't want this story to die. As for how she reacts, I ultimately plan on her slowly getting braver and braver as she experiences more that life and battle have to offer her.

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