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It doesn't matter how bad her day gets, because he will make it all the better. Even if the mocking laughter roars, drowning out all sound, his voice will always be louder still.
Even on the coldest days, her love will be a sun to warm her up.


So, I admit it, I was, let’s say, “less than sober” while writing this. Somehow I think that made it even more fun to write.

Constructive criticism is welcome, wanna-be critics are not. I do not have enough beer to deal with elitists. If I did, I’d be writing on Equestria Daily, not FiMfic. I’d also probably be too hung-over to write. Either way, I’m rabbit-trailing...
I hope you enjoy.

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This was pretty good for being in a drunken stupor.

Best Derpfic ever! :rainbowkiss:

SSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CCCCCCCCUUUUUTTTTTTEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:heart::heart: Best Derpyfic ever!:pinkiehappy:

Very nicely done. I love stories like this where there is no world ending catastrophe but you still find it easy to attach yourself to the characters because of the great characters. Five hundred points for the lovely character interaction. Derpy gets kudos for not striking back at the bullies, a kudos for the apple muffins(they sound delightful), and a Kudos for being my favorite kind of Derpy(smart, kind, and thoughtful) Turner also gets two kudos for the outstandingly nice things he said to Derpy about her cutiemark and eyes. Your daily total comes to five hundred points and five kudos, Your winnings can be exchanged for prizes at the reception desk.

moar? I was kinda hoping for a doctor whooves type of story... meh oh well I still loved it!

Dawwwww~~~

Loved it!!!:heart:

Aw! I love this. It's perfect, how she's so cool through all the hate n' junk they throw at her. and a Doctor Whooves/Time Turner pairing? It's literally my biggest ship ever! ^-^ bigger than the titanic, and this ship won't ever sink!

Did anyone else get tears in their eyes at the end? It's been awhile since I had tears, I enjoyed this fic. :fluttercry::ajsmug:

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