An Unlikely Match

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Hunter96

Hunter96 #1 · Mar 19th, 2014 · 2 · 7 · An Unlikely Match - Part 1 ·

You sir / ma'am may take all of my no.

shadowmane1

shadowmane1 #2 · Mar 19th, 2014 · 4 · 1 · An Unlikely Match - Part 1 ·

not bad, but maybe you could work on a more romantic approach instead of straight to the point

Tszeb

Tszeb #3 · Mar 19th, 2014 · 3 · 1 · An Unlikely Match - Part 1 ·

What shadowmane said, also, I think it would work better with an aged up Spike. Just sayin.

OF29

OF29 #4 · Mar 19th, 2014 · 2 · 3 · An Unlikely Match - Part 1 ·

While the pacing was a bit to fast for my liking, I would love to see more, maybe another chapter or even a sequel.

nickjward7

nickjward7 #5 · Jun 12th, 2014 · 1 · · An Unlikely Match - Part 1 ·

Please make some more will you

Rejected Scratches

Rejected Scratches #6 · Oct 29th, 2014 · 1 · · An Unlikely Match - Part 1 ·

Moar now!

Please

Comment posted by Asashi - Dark Fist Inari deleted Jul 1st, 2015

PoptartKitten

PoptartKitten #8 · Jul 1st, 2015 · 2 · · An Unlikely Match - Part 2 ·

MasterBrony Forever

MasterBrony Forever #9 · Jul 3rd, 2015 · 2 · · An Unlikely Match - Part 2 ·

LOVE IT!

AmtrakBrony

AmtrakBrony #10 · Dec 6th, 2015 · 1 · · An Unlikely Match - Part 2 ·

Wow. I have no idea why this story has about as many dislikes as it does likes. This story was very well-written and deserves more love.

Avid Fiction

Avid Fiction #11 · May 7th, 2016 · 1 · · An Unlikely Match - Part 2 ·

I liked this. It was nice. Could have used a little romance, but I'm just a romantic at heart. There are a few typos and errors with tenses, but they were easy to read over. Its a shame that it is done. Would love to have seen what changes they would have gone through as a result of their coupling. Would Spike become fully quadrupedal? Would his spikes become hair? Would Mac develop scales? Increased strength? Alas, we will never know.

Anyways, like I said, this was well done. Nice concept and was done with two of my fave characters. Not to mention one of my favourite pairings :3