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I just disvovered MLP and i gotta say its awesome! Mac IS the best pony, no denial, end of story

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A good start to the story ! Keep it up ! :eeyup:
''I am doing this to take over the throne, I am doing this for you...'' ? i think you ment ''I am NOT doing this to take over the throne, I am doing this for you...''

I am definitely loving the idea of a Celemac ship, personally I never thought of it but now that I think about it, it seems like it would be awesome! Will this story be updated regularly? I would love to see at least weekly updates, so far I am really liking how this is playing out and I definitely encourage you to continue this story. The only criticism I personally have is the few grammar errors, but other then that I am loving this story so far! So keep writing, and if you can, update it frequently! :ajsmug:

Comment posted by FoxLink deleted Mar 31st, 2014

before reading chapter:
hmmm Big mac and tia.... you have my attention...
after reading the chapter:
You got my full attention :pinkiehappy: I will make sure to look forward for new chapters!

That last sentence made me fave this :rainbowlaugh:

This should be interesting alright:eeyup:

A lot of Celestia ships lately eh? :yay:

Its a good start. For now all I can say "Carry On".:moustache:

Oh right, sorry french is my first and native language so I will make a few mistakes.
I sadly don't think I will be able to do weekly updates, BUT I work regurlarly on this story, this is my new project now.

4160921 Oy! I don't see anything wrong with that, Celestia deserves some love too :trollestia::heart::eeyup:

I would read, but really, the formatting is really irritating. Why is each and every sentence its own paragraph? (That, and your grammar for punctuation is... Good grief.)

Hey, what about Octavia/Mac:heart:?

You had my curiosity. But now you have my attention.
Let see hope it plays out.:ajsmug:

4161452 no. the ship is played out already. so shut up

Well, let's see, shall we? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

4163248 meh. but he's taken in this fic.

Celemac is just my personal favorite, I can understand other ships like rarimac and CheeriMac and i might try another mac ship after this one.
Its just that I prefer ships like Trixie/Mac and CeleMac because I believe opposites attract.
A farmer and a princess or a pretentious, narcissistic unicorn and a quiet and humble stallion complement eachother well.

4164069 Reminds me of Frozen. Watched the movie the day it went into theaters. I don't understand the popularity of it though.

4165363 of frozen? it was an alright movie but they did better

It needs a bit of editing, but so far not too bad at all :twilightsmile:

Here, have a thumb up! I'll favorite it when new chapters come about, fair enough? :trollestia:

I really like the set up, it's nice, believable, and no pony was too out of character.

I name the Celestia/Mac ship...
Melestia!
Characters are in sync, but I notice a mistake, that Rainbow Dash would NEVER make. When she says how awesome Bic Mac is, she says 'Thunderbolts', but they are called 'Wonderbolts'.

Good stuff. Keep it up, Jawhol?

Mac in the big city, lets see how this plays out.

This was a hilarious chapter! :rainbowlaugh:

Oh she'll keep an eye on this INDEED!

Oh my!

Oh boy.

Mac's gonna need to drink a LOT if he's gonna survive.

Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

Good chapter you now i think canterlot needs some mac

This screams of one of my Sister's (Margaret) matchmaking schemes...
If this turns out anything like her schemes, it should be hilarious.
Please, do continue.

The Inquisition demands more chapters. Do not disappoint.

and thus the plot thickens what shenanigans will come of Luna's plan idk, but i will enjoy seeing what happens:pinkiecrazy:

It felt good to see this when I checked

Ah, Good - headway in a rather promising story. Marvelous; keep up the good work, Ja?

Interesting can't wait to see what happens to Macintosh in next chapter

carpenting
Gardening
masonry
construction
Physicist
mathematician
manticore taming
dragon slaying
a phd in sexy....etc.

I was interested at the first chapter. Now I'm hooked.

Good read, need more. Hurry up with next chapter plox

Damn I hate reading a story that's really good only to find it hasn't been updated since 2014, well there goes another one.

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