all of the you this and you that feels a bit awkward, but the stories quality and flow are still there. so that's really more of an opinion than criticism.
This is pretty old, but I feel the need to say that it is good. Though, the dialogue of anon is kind of confusing. Having all things said in quotation marks would help. Besides from that, great read!
all of the you this and you that feels a bit awkward, but the stories quality and flow are still there. so that's really more of an opinion than criticism.
like it so far
This gonna be good
Very well done thus far! Have a fave and like.
This is pretty old, but I feel the need to say that it is good. Though, the dialogue of anon is kind of confusing. Having all things said in quotation marks would help. Besides from that, great read!
I love this story but I wish more human stories would use y/n for your name instead of giving you one or just stick with Anon