"Hitting the button, the light sprung into life, illuminating the room." That is what I call vivid writing. Loving it... It's a rare gift to be able to paint with words, and you my friend, have that gift.
With that, he faded back into the shadows and you lost track of him. You'd have to get somebody to teach you how to do that one.
You want to learn how to pull a Batman? That is easier said then done. Shadow Shield didn't even do it right, he is supposed to be COMPLETELY gone the moment someone stops looking at him, or at least vanish instantly...you have much to learn in the ways of the Bat, Shadow Shield.
Your character is a little too cowardly, I completely understand why someone would be afraid of Luna especially by that display, but the bat ponies are at worst cute, haven’t you seen them in the show? Why would he, considering his hight advantage, be scare of them?
"Hitting the button, the light sprung into life, illuminating the room."
That is what I call vivid writing. Loving it...
It's a rare gift to be able to paint with words, and you my friend, have that gift.
......Infamous last words for your hearing.
Kinda wished youd give the human actual dialog rather than LOZ Link style dialog.
Liking it so far.
Dun dun duuuuuun...
What I would have done...
"Hey, Celestia? She called me a pet... I'm out."
I can just imagine the talk the sisters had: "Really,Celey a pet? Has it at least been neutered? You recall what happened last time right?"
You want to learn how to pull a Batman? That is easier said then done. Shadow Shield didn't even do it right, he is supposed to be COMPLETELY gone the moment someone stops looking at him, or at least vanish instantly...you have much to learn in the ways of the Bat, Shadow Shield.
Your character is a little too cowardly, I completely understand why someone would be afraid of Luna especially by that display, but the bat ponies are at worst cute, haven’t you seen them in the show? Why would he, considering his hight advantage, be scare of them?