Isn't this Black Wraith team pretty much Fireteam Skyfall with even less accountability and national backing? Not complaining, just trying to work out if I've missed something. And I guess Cupcake isn't going to be invited along?
Thank you for updating, sooooo much. I've been bored out of my skull with all the stuff that's been oozing out of the what's hot section. You have been missed.
Damnit man, I just finished watching NCIS, the episodes where they go to Tail Avid, and I can't wait for the next chapter and in response to last chapter, yay more subtle Fleet-Dasher ship(fanboy squeal) and please please give us more Chapters and keep up the good work
Wow, in 3 days I was able to read everything so far, damn...I don't think I've ever read that much, that fast in a long time. Overall I really enjoyed the entire series (although the first one is my favorite, that's why I plan to reread it) and can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Also this comment is a day late because, I kinda had to go to sleep, it was like 1am.
Well that was exciting! I certainly am looking forward to the next bits! Honestly reading this stuff always encourages to return to my own writing, even if I just finished writing something, reading makes me want to hope back on.
I do have a question though. You've been capitalizing the 't' in Thestral, and I'm wondering if there's a reason for that. If I was writing about elves, dwarves, earth ponies, or unicorns none of their races get capitalized. Simply wondering why you've got 'Thestral' with a capital 'T.'
5342709 Earth gets capitalized in Earth ponies. Also, Thestrals were written that way in the Harry Potter canon, so I simply transferred it over. It's a confusing process of general consensus on which do and don't get capitalized.
5343074 that's just weird! people need to follow the rules! xD ah well, i asked and got my answer...and yes i am purposefully leaving my words uncapitalized...and it's driving me crazy...
I don't know why it took me this long to realize it but "House of Congress" as in "House of Parliament". Either way, still a House of Cards.
So Shining Armor no longer has an eye. Either it will be magically healed somehow or this story is really embracing the alternate universe tag and starting to deviate significantly from the canon.
The search for Cadance is really starting to heat up now. I'm really loving Just Cause and how he reminds me of Kevin Spacey (Whether that's intentional or not with House of Cards and Call of Duty: Advanced Warfare I do not know.) Still not sure if Fleethoof and Shining hitching their cart to him will end well. Either way, I look forward to oodles of excitement in the forthcoming chapters. (Edit Jake the Army Guy! Edit like the wind! ) Keep up the good work.
Damn man I'm gone for a few months and you go ahead and wrap up Overture in a really awesome way. (Btw Damn them feels in the end of last two chapters.)
Then go on to start the next chapter in Skyfall in a real badass way. I missed so much. I had to read through it all in one night. Can't Wait to get back on track. Great story man.
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1. Essentially USA special forces vs Mossad....this won't end well for the surrounding area.
2. The theme for Alric's men
English:
Yaaaaay this made my night!
Just's addressing the wrong Cap'n there.
And here we see those guys you teased us with in your stream. I like Centurion, he seems cool. And some lovely Sharp Shot lines, Sharp is best sniper.
That was the best Splinter Cell mission. Breaking into the CIA as an NSA agent.
Isn't this Black Wraith team pretty much Fireteam Skyfall with even less accountability and national backing? Not complaining, just trying to work out if I've missed something.
And I guess Cupcake isn't going to be invited along?
Well then ... this took a dark turn very quickly! This is getting better and better and I know you're going to throw us all over the place!
All that is left to add is :
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Thank you for updating, sooooo much. I've been bored out of my skull with all the stuff that's been oozing out of the what's hot section. You have been missed.
Damnit man, I just finished watching NCIS, the episodes where they go to Tail Avid, and I can't wait for the next chapter and in response to last chapter, yay more subtle Fleet-Dasher ship(fanboy squeal) and please please give us more Chapters and keep up the good work
Wow, in 3 days I was able to read everything so far, damn...I don't think I've ever read that much, that fast in a long time. Overall I really enjoyed the entire series (although the first one is my favorite, that's why I plan to reread it) and can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Also this comment is a day late because, I kinda had to go to sleep, it was like 1am.
I can't even begin to tell you how happy I was to see that you updated. So thanks
Well that was exciting!
I certainly am looking forward to the next bits! Honestly reading this stuff always encourages to return to my own writing, even if I just finished writing something, reading makes me want to hope back on.
I do have a question though. You've been capitalizing the 't' in Thestral, and I'm wondering if there's a reason for that. If I was writing about elves, dwarves, earth ponies, or unicorns none of their races get capitalized. Simply wondering why you've got 'Thestral' with a capital 'T.'
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Earth gets capitalized in Earth ponies. Also, Thestrals were written that way in the Harry Potter canon, so I simply transferred it over. It's a confusing process of general consensus on which do and don't get capitalized.
5343074 that's just weird! people need to follow the rules!
xD ah well, i asked and got my answer...and yes i am purposefully leaving my words uncapitalized...and it's driving me crazy...
I don't know why it took me this long to realize it but "House of Congress" as in "House of Parliament". Either way, still a House of Cards.
So Shining Armor no longer has an eye. Either it will be magically healed somehow or this story is really embracing the alternate universe tag and starting to deviate significantly from the canon.
The search for Cadance is really starting to heat up now. I'm really loving Just Cause and how he reminds me of Kevin Spacey (Whether that's intentional or not with House of Cards and Call of Duty: Advanced Warfare I do not know.) Still not sure if Fleethoof and Shining hitching their cart to him will end well. Either way, I look forward to oodles of excitement in the forthcoming chapters. (Edit Jake the Army Guy! Edit like the wind! ) Keep up the good work.
Damn man I'm gone for a few months and you go ahead and wrap up Overture in a really awesome way. (Btw Damn them feels in the end of last two chapters.)
Then go on to start the next chapter in Skyfall in a real badass way. I missed so much. I had to read through it all in one night. Can't Wait to get back on track. Great story man.
Aim High: Fly, Fight, Win
1) Did you shove a nitro booster up their technological advancements?
2) Computers? This is new.
3) Tanks?
So, they have helicopters, computers, effing red dot sights and holo optics and they don't have cars yet.... LOGIC AT ITS FINEST!
This reminds me of act one to a new Ocean's Eleven movie.