Twilight invents touchscreen technology, and everypony is thrilled to finally have some advancement in Equestrian technology. Everypony is happy with their new devices, though Twilight begins to notice everypony acting a little different. Less ponies fill the streets, businesses are dying, and Twilight and her friends are seeing each other less and less, and their friendship begins to weaken. Will their friendship be ruined, and what will be the effects of technology in Equestria be?
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Twi...welcome to Spike's world!
This was a bit difficult to read. Grammar and wording isn't bad, but it ain't great. I suggest getting an editor to help you.
The idea itself is probably not too original, but I haven't seen anything like this on here. I'm pretty sure this'll turn into a commentary on our overuse of technology nowadays, but if you deliver it right, this could be something good.
I'll be watching... with the help of my magical apple device.
Infinite Evil, thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it!