Pinkie Pie plays a prank on Rainbow Dash which goes horribly, horribly WRONG. Now she has resorted to making a deal with the devil himself more or less to save her life....DISCORD!
A SPECIAL NOTE REGARDING THIS STORY:
It occurs within the fanfiction universe from The return of Nightmare Moon, A filly's tale and the secret to mah success but is not in any way directly connected to it. there will be references but i do not plan on making this a confirmed continuation of the series! this event simply occurs within the universe i have created.^^
Chapters (4)
"I'm in no rush to dash to the finish, but do you feel the same?"
Clever.
Oh ho ho.
All of that info? Pinkie!
Wow... Just wow. An extremely good story, I loved reading this every single word. There were a few minor grammar and spelling mistakes but the story was really well written and thought through. I don't care if the idea is old, you gave it an amazing spin and story. Kudos to you!
Agreed!
It's teeming with spelling and grammar errors, but this story was amazing enough that it hardly bothered me. I couldn't stop reading it. Well done.
I didn't see that ending coming.
Heartfelt story, definitely. Full of twists and turns, full of time travel and reversals. Good job. I'm not ALL into lesbian shippings, though.
awesome story
yay!
my favorite character comes back too life awesome
also all the emotio
ns i felt while reading this 
I CANT STOP CRYING I LOVED IT I LOVED IT!!!!!!!
favorite story yet
ok well i have a suggestion, add Discord to the tags, because he does play a major role in this story
Fuck to the Yes that was awesome
a very fun story indeed! even though there were quite a few mistakes in it. I recommend rereading your work.
anyway, great story and:
keep up the good work!
Excelent way to end and good story, you confused me with the time but I think it was good to from you to give us that knowlegde but I can't follow as easy as the rest of the people
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You made several grammar mistakes but taking away that fact it was a good story. XD
GAH my icy Alaskan heart its melting from massive amounts of heartwarming feelings it hurts
pore rainbow
pore aj
pore pinky
and yet I regret reading nothing beautiful simply beautiful
daylight
I just realized something.... Pinkie pie had a chance to save both Rainbow Dash and herself.... Really good story and the ending was beautiful so Beautiful... Manly Tears were shed today
damn....why did pinkie have to make a deal with lord discord......i had hoped dash stay dead....
Beautiful, just beautiful.
that was indeed beautiful one of my favorite stries now
This story was beautiful. Many tears were shed, many many tears were shed. And although my heart is aching right now. I regret nothing. This story really touched me. Thank you for writing it. It will always be one of my favourite stories.
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Your very welcome
the feels!!! They hurt
quite a lot of spelling mistakes though
wow this story is just.... amazing
A beautiful story, really. Sad, but beautiful.
Wait... So pinkie Pie wants to go back in time, with all her memories intact, to save R.D. and if Ranibow is still alive then Pinkie becomes property of Discord.... But even Discord can't reatain her memories.... Soooooo you don't want a pinkie slave?
why you soo bittersweet! my heart is a total mess! why am i reading this??!!! gah! *cries forever*
This legitimately made me cry. Thank you for such a wonderful story.
Bravo,bravo that was truly a heart warming and tugging story I ended up crying at just the end of the story. Pinkie Pie.
Well done. This is a very heartfelt story.
Oh my...... I see the upcoming loop....
I can't stop crying and its been like 10 minutes! WAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!
And that is how I fan girl and cry for 21 minutes. That WAS AMAZING! :DDD
Question, can I make a sequel? I would just love too! :)
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Forgive the extremely late reply....and by extremely late I mean: "I saw this comment, didn't even consider it at first but now am second guessing it"
But yes, if you still wish, you may write a sequel, if you still want to that is just be sure to credit me.
5931357 Thank you so much! ^^ And it's fine, I do the same with my Subscribers on YouTube. XD
Tip one: Don't be so literal with your words. When the only danger despair you feel is because someone told you exactly what was happening it's difficult to feel real emotions over a piece of fiction.
Tip two, don't tar and feather Rainbow Dash, she gets pissed. :rainbow huh:
New Pinkie Pie was reborn