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Button Mash plays Flappy Bird and ends up breaking his JoyBoy. And quite possibly, he also broke his moms favorite book.
I decided to actually write somethng for this site, so I did! I enjoyed the four-hour process of writing this. Hope it's not too bad for you to read it.
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Edit 08-08-17: don't read it. Please. Even I, the... author, find this story excruciatingly cringy to read.
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THANK THE SISTERS SOMEBODY FINALLY WROTE A STORY ABOUT THIS
A short, fun story to read. A couple of grammar issues, I believe, but I liked it overall. Next time, I would say using more varied syntax (sentences of different types) and practice the "show, not tell" approach (I have the same problem, too
)
Note to self: abstain from writing comments from a mobile device
4052430 You're welcome! I was actully surprised that no one had got this idea before!
4052457 I'll see what I can do with my grammar mistakes!
God I know how he feels. I GOT THROUGH SIX PIPES! Then I threw my phone down and shouted "DONE!" Haven't played it since...
4052533 I hope you won't get angry, but my record is 48.
I got to like 173 some-odd on my first try.
didn't get past 10 since
Nah I'm not mad. My best friend's score is 162 so...I've learned to just accept that I suck and to embrace the suck.
Think positive!
4052545
Ha, 57!
I'm fixing alot of grammatical errors right now, so brace yourselves!
Cool
Only got to 2, unfortunately...
but hey, what can I say? Very entertaining. 
Lol
Worst game ever.
Never played Flappy Bird myself. Is it really that frustrating?
4055328 Yes.
4055760 I'll take your word for it^^
4055328 Lets just say a simple yes.
4058856 okay^^
Just like my first time still need to buy a new IPhone >.>
My Record is 50 You Buttnuggets!
I can see some potential here, but you've definitely got a lot of room for improvement. Aside from 4052457's advice to show, don't tell (which is beyond crucial for writing engaging prose), the narrative style would have worked better with a first-person perspective from Button Mash's POV.
4089521 Thanks for the advice!
4104081
I can remember my first time playing flappy bird I though it was just some stupid game but then 5 minutes later I find myself screaming at my ipad :3
AH MAH GAD finally...someone who understands (about 85% of) the correct usage of punctuation and/or grammar.
Good story, too.
But seriously, the mods really need to kick up their grammar checking if I have to search half an hour for a story (like this one) written by someone with at least a high-school English education.
6179826 Thanks! Even though this is a pretty late answer, it's an answer.
This was written on the 8th of March 2014. I was 13 years old, and to make it even crazier, my first language is not English, it's Danish.
It does pay off if you listen in class, folks.
4052430 Oh my god! 90 weeks sure is a long time!
I gotta be more active on this site. Maybe I'll login again in 50 weeks?
1,025 words lol, it looks like it was originally small and you added more just to get about the 1k mark to publish it.
7479155
not gonna lie ur right
dont read this