A former brony meets a certain pony in the worst of possible circumstances. Wrong place, wrong time, wrong pony.
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Sad derpy is sad
Good but sad story
Nobody kills Derpy and gets away with it!
Ohh my god...........
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frigging jerkwad.
6507599 So you liked it then?
6512952 WHY WOULD ANYONE KILL DERPY?!
6514450 Cause cold and starvation.
I liked it. I wonder if they tasted muffins in her meat.
6542511 Thanks!
6542511 Mmm....horse meat.
6595266 I don't know what else to add.
6595544 I'll keep that in mind. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!
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6753931 Just to let you know, I've got a story outline made out for the sequel but I'm not sure when I'll have time to write it. I've been pretty busy recently.
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6763434 It's all good.
With this storyline you struck gold, but it still feels like it could have been so much more. It could have focused so much deeper on the moral dilemma within our brony here, who would never have wanted to kill Derpy and yet knew he must. The original one was more vivid in comparison, while this seems a rushed conversion with little thought on improving it...