Out in Ponyville

by Shatterpath

Epilog

Epilog

In a familiar flash of green dragonfire, a scroll appears in the crisp air of Canterlot to be caught in a glow of magic. Smiling, the alicorn of the sun unrolls the object to eagerly discover what her prized student has learned most recently.

Dear Princess Celestia,
Since my arrival in Ponyville, my life has changed in significant ways. None more so than how my new friendships have taught me to love not just them, but myself as well. They taught me enough to give me the courage to take a wild chance when faced with a once in a lifetime opportunity. It seems I have learned not only friendship, but deeper, intimate love as well. I remember hearing once that you have to like someone before you can love them. Honestly, I didn’t understand it then, needing some of the lessons I have learned here in Ponyville. When love did come to me, it has been every bit as stunning and magical as I have heard. That the packaging is not at all what I expected has only added to the magic of the experience.
Telling others of this love has been an adventure in itself, but so far we are weathering it. Expect to see me soon in Canterlot with details of my wonderful news.
As always, your faithful student,
Twilight Sparkle

The End, for now...

Comments

[The Incredible Werekitty]

All my d'awws. You may have them.

[RyujinDeath]

AWSOME! story I love it.

[Delicious]

Mmm, I see you split it up into seperate chapters.

[Shatterpath]

380406 There's a sequel waiting in queue. Hope you like it!

[Shatterpath]

382683 Thank you! The sequel is up where I get more in depth with them.

[Shatterpath]

390112 You may be right, I don't know all the fandom lingo!

[Hobbestc]

Need sequel now. Anyway, very nice. Now we just have to wait for all the big family reactions. From Princess on down to big brothers. Bring it on!

[schoolruler]

Thumbs up!

[Lancethefox]

This was a wonderful read. I can't wait for the sequel.

[Nyysjan]

my thumbs up, u haf it.

[Meandering Road]

A fun and well-written story, you've got a lot of talent for viewpoints and for voices- in the sense of the words that different ponies use as a preference.

Very nice, and quite enjoyable.

[Frizzy]

Epilogue*

[TAB]

Gets around to reading it, finally finishes, first thing:

I WANT MOAR! NAO!

Second: This is an amazing story, and I'd love a sequel

[Chloronium]

Wow...this is absolutely one of the better stories, i loved it, really.

[Chloronium]

472339

The sequel is up already y'know!

[TAB]

475665 YES

[LonelyChild]

What is this mysterious sequel I hear of? Very good, ending seemed a little short, but obviously that will change with the sequel

[PatRoison]

This was a very cute story. It was interesting to read it in first person, and I think you succeeded. I thought it was funny how a few ponies had AppleDash on their minds, and how Applejack reacted each time. I look forward to the sequel.

[Comma-Kazie]

683889 So do I for that matter, but it's a nice change-up from the heartbreak I usually get when reading about her family.

Each to their own.

[Shadow Step]

Thanks to your writing i now diabetes.
Thank you for writing something so sweet

[Karnagar]

I'm sure I've read this somewhere else, but there was a bunch more chapters and it was still unfinished.

[Smirkythread]

Very sweet.

[Exia01]

Did you just.... Do a synopsis in the blurb?

I don't know whether that's good or bad.
On one hand it lets me know what is coming.
On the other, it lets me know what is coming.

[Tolerant Cactus]

Very good, had a great time reading this. Not many people write TwiJack, so thank you. I liked how you kept switching the POV, great choice. And nice job with AJs parents, I was skeptical at first, but you made it work.

[DarthLena]

I really liked this story. I wasn't too sure about a TwiJack at first, but you pulled it off so well I think I might read more