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Applejack and some of her friends are bored with apples and Pinkie parties. They long for adventure and danger - and fate brings it to them. Granny Smith reveals some amazing secrets in this story that takes the ponies far, far away.
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I think I laughed harder at this than my morality should normally allow XD. That was funny on multiple levels and I really enjoyed reading it! I guess the only thing I would say is that it was a little bit heavy on dialogue and we never really got to see into the minds of the characters. I also wish that each character had contributed a little more to the story; Applejack, Big Mac, Rarity and Rainbow Dash really don't do anything for the overall story; Granny Smith is really the only character who makes the difference. With that being said I think that this could really go somewhere! "The Adventures of Starshop Enter Price!" Good work and keep it up! Also have a follow :D
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Thanks, this will make my friend (she wrote this, not me) very happy! Thanks for the follower. Feel free to check out some of my other stories!
4352028 Sure thing! And I'll be sure to let you know what I think :D
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Thanks. Really appreciate comments. Glad you read this one though, I really felt that it was sad how few comments my friend got on her awesome story!
4352033 :D of course! There really isn't a point to having a fanfiction site if no one is willing to give feedback or share ideas. Be sure to tell your friend that she does an excellent job writing in writing comedy! And pretty please pass on my notes as well! I feel they could help make the story (and future stories) more enjoyable! :D
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Yep
Of course I will! She have earlier experience of writing books, which probably made this fanfic 's quality as good as it is.
4352051 And I hope that she keeps on writing and getting better! Authors always grow after every story that they write :D
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Yeah, I don't think she planned on doing more, but this comments might convince her think other ways!
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