Pyrus Nightwrite, a new foal from Canterlot, meets Scootaloo through an unfortunate event. the two instantly strike up a friendship. But the more time they spend together, the more Scootaloo finds herself thinking about him, and wondering if there's more to their friendship than either of them realize.
Scootaloo Shipfic. there aren't enough of these out there.
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technically this is my 2nd fanfic, but it's the first I've published, so feedback is more than welcome. i really love it, positive or negative. if you think i'm doing anything wrong please tell me so i can fix it
hmm.. fun read i'll track it
WALL!
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TEXT!
this appears to need some revison
Don't ship OCs with normal characters that are into the show. Please..
364267 i meant i will add the characters that end up with major roles. right now i have to plan a bit more.
364910 ok, next chapter will be less of a wall, sorry
364832 thanks
An okay story, but needs more 'show' than 'tell'. Space out text. Will reserve my thumb for now.
365205
Also separate the text when they're talking. Take everypony else's advice above and your second chapter would work better.
Tracking for now :).
Not sure if I like it or not, but it just so happens that I like shipping, so I'll grab this story's tracking number. XP
365384 thanks. this is my first uploaded, so i'm still getting used to the formatting of FimFiction.net. i'm fixing it now.
This is interesting, hope we get to see what the poem is about
Well that was cute as buck.
Easy to read and I love where its going.
365781 ah, but that is the question.
365827 yaaaay you like it
This is grate keep them comming
366171 you got it, 2nd chapter should be out in a few days.
yay
update
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375590 you took the words right outta my mouth
365001 I like OC ships personally.
375983 lol i just felt the need to put it out there before anyone else had a chance to
376228 i remembered your thoughts on poetry, and so i made this poem. as Pyrus is a poet i will be writing poems and putting them is as his writings. much of it will have to do with, you guessed it, the night. Pyrus Nightwrite is funny that way.
and thanks for the not bad. it's better than a "look out, we got a badass over here" being put in response to my poems...
376169 me too. i don't see why he/she has a problem with them. just pull out a can of love and tolerate and scroll over them, if you don't like them. that's what i tend to do on cupcakes remakes.
Personally, I like this story! As you have mentioned, a Scootship has never been done before, so it'll be interesting to see how this works out.
The style of writing is great, and I'm not entirely sure why some people seem to dislike it. Awesome work, keep it up! 
376472 as my new friend "fluttershy511" has told me, it was done as a side story in "family mares" but i have never seen it, and i love scootaloo, so i made one
the main reason people disliked it originally was because i had not gotten used to Fimfiction.net's configuration. it was a wall of text in the begining, it looked really bad. and i did do a lot of telling and not much showing...
376359 no problem, and I liked the poem too, can't wait to see more
376526
well, this means it's off to brainstorming the next chapter tonight, writing it over the next few days, and publishing it soon.
as for the poems, i'm actually considering trying to get at least one on per chapter. however, that might not be possible. the hardest part would be getting them to fit into the fanfiction.
376567 well I'm sure it'll be great, I'm expecting great things from this story.
Yes updates! This pleases me, you shall be spared!!!!
Seriously awesome work!
Awesome! I can tell this is going to be big!
378961 you really think it's gonna be big? thanks, that means a lot.
hahaha! Silver Spoon knocked the apple out of her "hands".
Great job buddy. love where its going.
383617 oh buck!
fixing now.
thanks for catching that Scar.
Hmm let's see where this goes... (Also you misspelled throne)
Other than misspelling throne, good update.
404103>>404407 thank you both for catching that, fixing now.
Dope.
410618 i read that in your voice.
next update out. let me know if you catch any more embarrassing typo's, and i'll fix them.
Yay! Update!
Please please please continue! Scootaloo deserves more of your love!
540341 i will ASAP
finals are coming though so it may have to wait, plus i'm working on another fic as well, which i will release as soon as the cover art is done.
josh u know my feelings on it already, decided to make it FIM FIC official
keep it coming bud
870618Haha thanks. and it's coming, as fast as i can get it.
unfortunately i can't upload the next chapter yet, but soon, it'll be here.
It's too short... needs more detail at times, I mean it's such a light read that skipping scenes isn't exactly justified. But whatevs. Story's entertaining enough and details are written well enough to get a pretty good picture in my mind. Lots of grammatical and spelling errors, but that can mostly be ignored. Overall not bad.
1133743 thanks for the imput, i'll keep that in mind.
. oh well, i'll fix it.
as for the skipping sceans, there will be much less in the future. the only reason i did is i find school boring
also, the next chapter is coming out, i'mma put it up now.
Dun dun dun.
The CMCs get into a lot of trouble, don't they?
Also, just because I've never gotten to do this before... FIRST!
You should make an alternate fic where Pyrus is a vampire. I got that chilly vamp feeling when he was breathing in the night air and was, for all intents and purposes, invigorated. Just, no Twilight, the world has had enough of that crap...
No, no, not you Twilight, you're cool! 
hahaha yes :D this is awesome!!!! and thanks... now keep your flank in gear and write more!!!! (on your own time of course)
5 moustaches for you
1134739 here's a thought...
i actually have an idea to make a "disk 2" Scooter tracks. the point of it is to put in there alternate endings, side stories, and in this case a vampire book. not a whole fic, likely a short story.
but yes, i will use that idea. thanks.
Yay! This updated! This is one of my more favorite CMC ship stories. I'm glad it updated. Hope it does it again soon.
1142070 how about i make you a deal?
you go and share this with people however you see fit, and i'll get the next chapter up as soon as i can.
sound good?