Hello! My name is Dave. I'm an avid reader, and self proclaimed lazy writer. Also If I comment on your story. Sorry about the length. I tend to do that.
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The symbol is a "treble clef".
Not bad, it was... romantic. But Vinyl x Octavia is better.
4028618 Ah thank you, I'll fix that quickly.
4028628 Yes but the choice was random, I just wanted to do something at random, so she was as good of a pick as any.
4028644 Well, Octavia is classy enough to be shipped with anyone so... 4 moustaches
4028666 Hah! I'll take that as a good compliment!
You might consider getting an editor, or at least a proofreader. The grammatical and formatting errors here are glaring to the point where they make the story even difficult to read.
Now, I don't know music, but referring to Octavia's cutie mark as a "Clefable" sounds incorrect...unless Octavia suddenly developed an interest in Pokemon.
4031148 I know I know, but I wanted to test myself and see how id do.
4031524 I know I know, but it's fixed and it was a my mistake because I didn't know the right pronounce for it, and suddenly that just popped into my head, I have no idea why, but I learned from that mistake thanks to Revenant Wings, and his good pointer there.
And also as I said before this was me just trying something quick and wanting to mess around :P People like it and I am happy! Because I love it when I can make people happy!
I too have a feather fetish. Fav'd,upvoted.
4055615 Thank you!
Thought is said Abraham Lincoln, I am disappoint
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Well if you are disappointed at his name then I can't help you! XD
I thought it was a good name for a Griffon.
4962279 i thought it would be abe lincoln and octavia getting it on, that's one fic i would read
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Well I guess each has his own. But the story is called "Feather Fetish" for a reason.
4963704 abe had feathers
http://youtu.be/uQ8xeU82Jc8
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I think I get the general message you are sending, I got another message for you.
You don't like it, don't read it. Simple as that.
5400278 Thank you for feeding the Troll that was TOOO easy
I like griffons and ponies but where was the feather fetish?
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It's a play on words. Since Gryphons are mostly fluff and feathers, also at the time when I wrote this I was listening a lot to the Fallout Equestria audiobook and Calamity's sarcastic comment on Velvet having a feather fetish because of his wings stuck with me at the time.
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Okay. I buy that. I was kinda hoping for some bondage play though. That's a little fetish of mine.