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I like this idea! Keep it up!
The title! It is amazing!
very well written! Isaac's character seems a little off, but otherwise, it's REALLY good! I'm tracking!
I'd hate to see the monsters here do anything to the ponies, but that seems inevitable, doesn't it? I certainly find the idea appealing, but others seem to disagree from the bar. That, or simply they do not like the idea so then there are differences of opinion. In any case, I'm very interested on how the pair will become accustomed to life in Pony society, considering they're a race that do not eat meat.
367052 I agree
Oh cool, a dead space crossover!
Oh, romance is tagged.
Moving on.
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Yea romance is tagged, but don't worry! I just tagged it with that because Isaac and Ellie may begin to get "romantic" with eachother, but we'll see. 
Honestly? This wasn't really that well written. Aside from some common typos (such as "women" for "women"), there's very little emotion going on here, and what is there isn't very engaging. As in, they look into each other's eyes three times. Description is pretty skimpy too.
One of the more glaring problems is that there's no transition. At least put a line break to show each scene change.
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Thanks! And yea I figured Isaac's personality may be a bit off, but it's been a while since I've played Dead Space so I couldn't really remember how he is. I plan on doing a quick playthrough of the games again, so if you notice a change in Isaac's personallity in the coming chapters it's because I've realised where I made mistakes.
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Thanks Sixinthehood for pointing out some of the mistakes! I will give it a re-read and fix any issues that are present. Also, regarding the "out-of-character" dialogue, I plan on re-playing the games so I can get a better feel for their personallities. So, hopefully in the coming chapters I will have them back to their "normal" selves!
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I apreciate your comment. It helps point out my fics shortcomings so i can properfly fix them. So thank you for letting me know what exactly needs fixing! I hope you'll come back and read the rest of the fic though!
oh ho ho.
Ze Clarke has reached ze newest challenge in zis life.
ZWhat shall happen now? Ho Ho
apologize for the bad impression but couldn't resist, even though it has nothing to do with this topic.
I have made some corrections to the fic after reading the helpful comments you are all posting! Please, I urge you to point out any issues you have, so I may properly rectify them! Also, Thank you for enjoying the story!
"Ellie rolled her eyes and then returned to the front of the ship and sat back down in her chair."
LOLWUT? Oh I'm such a devil, you can always edit though =D (and me too). Please keep writing, want to see what happens.
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Still needs to be a couple of breaks around the Twilight scene. Otherwise it looks much better.
cool
Holy flying fuck...AMAZING!!!
should we fuck now or later?
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Now's good!
What's this I've found? Looks promising!
Interesting, will have to see where this rabbit hole leads to.
My avatar is probably all that is needed to tell how interested I am in this story.
twilight is going to kill him with her unsated hunger for knowledge
Also, THIS IS TRACKED!
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oh my god
YES
GOOD
Well, the title definitely caught my attention.
Dead Space? Dead Space! DEAD SPACE!!!
So much Dead Space. Gotta see it all.
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Yes! In fact, after I give the first chapter a re-read to find and fix any grammatical errors, I will begin work on the next chapter! I've been known to not stop working on something once I've started it, so hopefully I will have a next chapter up real soon!
Just letting everyone who reads this comment know, I believe I have fixed all of the errors that were present in my fic. I also added some more details here and there. Not too many though, so it's not like you have to re-read the chapter or anything. If anyone still finds mistakes please let me know!
I don't give a flying fuck, this story is AWESOME!
I predict that he
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Is gonna get owned b/c the diamond dogs r nubs. :3
Chapter 2 is up! Hope you guys enjoy it! Please, let me know if you spot any mistakes with spelling or grammer!
Damn.
oh well can't wait till the next one.
Great! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Issac is Chuck Norris. From the future. That is how exactly freaking bad ass he is.
awesome is the only word I think of at present time to describe this chapter.
I cant wait to see celestia's reaction to his memorys
Oh Isac, please check your manliness at the door because you'll no longer be needing it.
<Nuclear Launch Detected>
Dropping in
3...
2...
1...
MMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAARRRRRR!!!!
I can't shake the feeling of Necro's in the future, and I am ok with this. Looking forward to hilarity at the castle
Read ALL the good HiE stories!
Holy crap mang, moar, I want everyone to see him retract his helmet.
Isaac should have used deadly force.
Awesome chapter, I especially like how you did the first fight. One thing though : Isaac's jet boosters only work in zero-gravity, so him flying off like that wouldn't work. Then again, pegasi flying with those tiny wings wouldn't work either. Maybe put in a mention of Isaac noticing the gravity here to be a lot lighter than Earth and remembering that when he's running away and activates his jet boots. Or maybe have Isaac use the jet boots as a last-ditch effort , as he can't outrun the guards on foot, and is suprised when they work because magic.
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Oh yea.... Completely forgot about that. Thanks for pointing that out and I plan on making an explanation as to why the boots worked in the coming chapter. Thank you for enjoying the fic though!
NEED MORE
Not happy with the idea of Isaac being captured or Ellis. It's to predictable and boring. The idea of these ponies getting there hands on advanced technology is like giving modern-day weaponry to the Nazis during WWII. It would have made more sense if neither Isaac or Ellis had been captured. In my opinion at least.
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Isaac does have a knack for getting out of situations like this, you know.
I understand your reasoning. It is pretty predictable, but I don't know if they will remain captured for much longer.
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And you shall recieve more later on today!
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Ya and he very well know to kill everything and everyone that piss him off! Take Tiedemann for example, he constantly tried to kill Isaac in Dead Space 2. Especially in the Government Sector with those 200 guards/security personnel. Isaac kills all those guards by letting the necromorphs in. And then he later brutally kills Tiedemann. Let's not forget Isaac is no longer sane. He has a connection to the Markers now and he still sees things. Mainly Nicole or the people he's killed or have seen killed, like Kendra, Stross, Tiedemann, Hammond, Challus Mercer, Dr. Terrance Kyne and etc.
Also Isaac seems to be quite a pessimist, cynical and very damn sarcastic. He doesn't give a damn about authority anymore since no one can really be trusted. And he should be a quite a bit paranoid. There's also the fact he should see flashes of horror. Like in Dead Space 2 when Isaac sees things of horror when there is nothing there. He should have flashes of see Necromorphs ponies for brief moments. And that just ''jet' boots he has only work in zero gravity.