I like this idea! Keep it up!

The title! It is amazing!

very well written! Isaac's character seems a little off, but otherwise, it's REALLY good! I'm tracking!

I'd hate to see the monsters here do anything to the ponies, but that seems inevitable, doesn't it? I certainly find the idea appealing, but others seem to disagree from the bar. That, or simply they do not like the idea so then there are differences of opinion. In any case, I'm very interested on how the pair will become accustomed to life in Pony society, considering they're a race that do not eat meat.

367052 I agree

Oh cool, a dead space crossover!

Oh, romance is tagged.

Moving on.

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Yea romance is tagged, but don't worry! I just tagged it with that because Isaac and Ellie may begin to get "romantic" with eachother, but we'll see.

Honestly? This wasn't really that well written. Aside from some common typos (such as "women" for "women"), there's very little emotion going on here, and what is there isn't very engaging. As in, they look into each other's eyes three times. Description is pretty skimpy too.
One of the more glaring problems is that there's no transition. At least put a line break to show each scene change.

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Thanks! And yea I figured Isaac's personality may be a bit off, but it's been a while since I've played Dead Space so I couldn't really remember how he is. I plan on doing a quick playthrough of the games again, so if you notice a change in Isaac's personallity in the coming chapters it's because I've realised where I made mistakes.

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Thanks Sixinthehood for pointing out some of the mistakes! I will give it a re-read and fix any issues that are present. Also, regarding the "out-of-character" dialogue, I plan on re-playing the games so I can get a better feel for their personallities. So, hopefully in the coming chapters I will have them back to their "normal" selves!

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I apreciate your comment. It helps point out my fics shortcomings so i can properfly fix them. So thank you for letting me know what exactly needs fixing! I hope you'll come back and read the rest of the fic though!

oh ho ho.
Ze Clarke has reached ze newest challenge in zis life.
ZWhat shall happen now? Ho Ho
apologize for the bad impression but couldn't resist, even though it has nothing to do with this topic.

I have made some corrections to the fic after reading the helpful comments you are all posting! Please, I urge you to point out any issues you have, so I may properly rectify them! Also, Thank you for enjoying the story!

"Ellie rolled her eyes and then returned to the front of the ship and sat back down in her chair."
LOLWUT? Oh I'm such a devil, you can always edit though =D (and me too). Please keep writing, want to see what happens.

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Oh god. She apparently grew her other eye back in that seen! It shall be fixed!

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Still needs to be a couple of breaks around the Twilight scene. Otherwise it looks much better.

cool

Holy flying fuck...AMAZING!!!

should we fuck now or later?

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Now's good!

What's this I've found? Looks promising!

Interesting, will have to see where this rabbit hole leads to.

My avatar is probably all that is needed to tell how interested I am in this story.

twilight is going to kill him with her unsated hunger for knowledge
Also, THIS IS TRACKED!
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oh my god

YES

GOOD

Well, the title definitely caught my attention.

Dead Space? Dead Space! DEAD SPACE!!!
So much Dead Space. Gotta see it all.

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Yes! In fact, after I give the first chapter a re-read to find and fix any grammatical errors, I will begin work on the next chapter! I've been known to not stop working on something once I've started it, so hopefully I will have a next chapter up real soon!

Just letting everyone who reads this comment know, I believe I have fixed all of the errors that were present in my fic. I also added some more details here and there. Not too many though, so it's not like you have to re-read the chapter or anything. If anyone still finds mistakes please let me know!

I don't give a flying fuck, this story is AWESOME!

I predict that he
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Is gonna get owned b/c the diamond dogs r nubs. :3

Read ALL the good HiE stories!