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Spike has tried to become the perfect knight; unfortunately Rarity rejects him. His cries of anguish do not go unheard in the moonlit night. Luna comforts the ailing dragon however her hurting heart yearns too. Meanwhile Rarity realizes what she is missing and sets forth to undo her mistake. However, as Spike gets closer to the Night Princess intrigue is sure to follow.
Spike x Luna, one insane ship, no paddle!
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As much as I wan't to hate Rarity for what she did, I cant. I think that Sparity would never work, (don't mistake that fealing for not liking it, there fun to read! But I digress.) I really hope this story updates often!
P.S. Way to go spike!
4017142 There's alot more in depth explanation in the coming chapter about Rarity's emotions.
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I was hoping there would be.
Also, in my previous comment, those were my felings towards Sparity shiping in general, not this story in particular. Just wan't you to know that.
Eagerly waiting for more!
4017186 Most shipping is unlikely.
That's what makes it fun. Is it better being set in your course, or is more noble to fight for that which you love? Unrequited love is a bittersweet drink.
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That is so true...
So Rarity cares more about her business and what the snobs in Canterlot would think of her if she were Spike. She said instinct? So basically to her it would never work out because Spike is a dragon?
I am happy to see your Luna does a great job of keeping that feeling of power but that approachability that I've always felt she had. This mature cultured Spike I feel would be a great match for her. She is someone that wouldn't fear him, someone that could keep him grounded, that would enjoy his mature moments as well as his childish as well. I know Rar will come to regret it but this will just have to become a life lesson for her to not to overlook the good things in front of her
Go high or go home they say.
Best ending: Spike remains alone, attains wizardhood and ascends beyond mortal power
4017586 I have to agree with you there dude. This new form of Spike is not only believable but is also a good match for Luna. I can't wait to see how this friendship grow into love.
This reminds me of a similar story involving a Celestia/Rarity/Spike triangle from a few years ago. Not a bad start though, and I can understand why Rarity wouldn't feel attracted to a radically different species, which is what I assume was meant by the 'instinct' line, even if I think it's a bit overused in stories where Rarity either rejects Spike outright or is unsure what she wants.
I just have one nitpick. This is clearly set in the future, long after the events of FiM, but Luna still speaks in the "olden language", for lack of a canon term. However, she's already gotten over it by the events of A Canterlot Wedding, and definitely by Sleepless in Ponyville. I could understand her relapsing into it now and again, but here, it's just sort of weird.
Like i've already faved
RARITY
There are no words i can think of that can express The anger i feel right now! >:(
4017561 I'd say it's more that "in the right light" he sets of her natural pray survival instincts. The others felt more like excuses she presented to try and soften the blow. More practical reasons then simply "you scare me shitless", you know?
4019703 there is the pony finger
4019816 True, but sending her to sun is much better
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Yea I know the story you are talking about, it's on my favorites and the description gave me flashbacks haha
4019840 or send her to a converting between the moon and sun
Ooooohhhhh the romance is so natural here.
This is goooooooood! 10/10
ron
This is interesting. Looking forward to more!
All hail Primarch Spike, son of Celestia.
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Can't wait for more!
You sir, deserve a like, a favorite, and for good measure, a follow.
4019585 4020648 4022144 Thanks for your support! It means the world to me! I shall have to quicken my quill!
Please write more?
I cannot wait until you write the next chapter!
4017203 so true
Ah! Stories like these remind me of my younger years! The memories... that I wish I could forget. I hated those days.
Thank God I'm finally old.
Anyways, not a bad start. I'm interested :)
Wiki on Lunatics and "Lunacy"
Are you implying the characters in your story are mentally unstable?
I think someone must be insane, considering the main pairing.
And before you start complaining I'm hating over here, I'm not.
Authors can do whatever floats their boat.
Great start,cant help but say its Gryphon, not griffin. Make me think of a kingdom of Peter Griffins n such xD
More and more I see that I can use as inspiration to start anew myself. Very well written my friend and excellent story going along so far too.
I'm all for rarity loosing spike to Luna and regretting her decision.
That was a nice chapter.
4023048 Nope, he went and visited the griffon empire (remember the episode where the griffon house was it's own country?)
DUDE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
or i will whine like Rarity!!!!! Too late. 
4022934 Dude. Its play-on words. Luna...Lunacy. Get it? It's a pun. Maybe not the best pun, but a pun all the same. Plus love can be pretty fucking crazy dude. Personal experience there.
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And perhaps it was and still is sarcasm on my part?
4024751 Lol and who needs sarcasm?
4022934
I've been editing for Akashic for a while, and with everything the both of us have written, talked about, messed around with and generally experimented upon, I can say that our mental stability is definitely not %100. But that's part of what makes him such a good writer.
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Quicken your quill indeed...
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It's fun till the point someone or somepony gets hurt...
Then... it gets extatic!
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Ecstatic indeed. I'm not going to be giving out any spoilers, I just hope more people will enjoy the story. It's been a pleasure editing it.
4026322 He be my lieutenant in battles before and hopefully afterward. Friendship is oft said to be a vessel for many in calm waves but come stormy seas capacity for one. I am proud to say we've been sailing the good ship for so long.
4026459 What is drama without trauma?! What value is a victory given? How much sweeter doth thine fruits of labor taste after an earnest effort?
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How many licks does it take to get to the center of a tootsie pop?
Oh oh, and I totally don't support this story. I am here just to lurk in the comments,
replying to the interesting ones and berating the stupid ones.
This is pretty good so far!
great story still, did you draw that picture of nightshade yourself?
4039016 Yup
I do my own cover art and I love illustrating my characters!