Sometimes saying you’d do anything, means giving everything. How hard would you push yourself to keep a promise, and more importantly get back to the ones you love. This is the story that includes my life; this is the story of me in Equestria.
I'd like to give a personal thanks to my nephew Chopper Woods for giving my story its name, and to my two friends Alec Cage and nathan moyer 922 who were so kind to proofread my story, thanks a bunch to all of you. I appreciate all of what you have done.
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Chapters (15)
nicee such a cool story
soo happy i helped you
I knew that I would enjoy this the moment I finished reading the description. Let's do this!
I'm going to do my best to make a comment on each chapter of this story.
Intro: Well call me a smallmouth bass, because I'm hooked. A few errors here and there, but very, very good overall. I have a feeling that this is going to be about 20% cooler than what I'm expecting.
Chapter 1: And away we go! This is getting pretty awesome, and to be honest (Go ahead, sue me.), this probably a higher caliber story than anything I could ever write. On to chapter 2.
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Thanks, and i know it still has its faults but hey, that's what makes it mine, no stories perfect and i'm ok with that because i think the faults just show me a bit more
I'm dyslexic, why hide it? its a part of who i am
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Thank you, but don't underestimate yourself, you can do anything you set your mind to, but remember the number one thing, your heart.
And also i really appreciate what your doing, commenting on each chapter, i don't really know what to say other then thank you, i truly appreciate it
this is pretty good writing. i found some misspelling scattered here and there but nothing to bad. the paceing seems a bit fast though. also it seems this story has a few cliches little but its still good. and i like to see someone achiwally being logical for once in an HiE so thats a good change
4224310 Noted, thank you
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if you want see mispelling look at me! ha i am russian i no speek english
Okaaaaaay.....what in this retarded universe is going on? Now you made me curious.
This was heartwarming.
This whole chapter and walk to Ponyville is completely pointless and unnecessary. I could not take this seriously. No one in their right minds would ask an injured man to walk that many miles, I don't care who is the ruler. Which is why this chapter is unrealistic and terrible.
Despite the terrible misspellings and one horrible plot hole, this story was great. I cried many manly tears from this. Well done.