Story Notes. · 10:51pm Jul 13th, 2014
/ / /NOTES/ / / This story is me and my life and how I think I would react if I went to equestria. The main protagonist in this story isn’t someone that’s like or portrays as me, it’s me. I made this story with my most honestly self, all the reactions and feelings in this story are my own. That’s one of the reasons this story took so long, always keeping it to my honest self wasn’t easy at points, but I actually learned a lot about myself in doing so. So when you read this, you’re reading about me and some things I’ve been through and have felt, keep that in mind.
The time line for this story is after season three, the way I made it I’m not including season four. I started making this before hand, so I made it as if it hadn’t happen or never was going to. Also I will not be including Equestria Girls, not because I didn’t like the movie, I loved it. It just would have been too complicated and everything if I did, so I’m just not including it all together. The time line for my life in the story is near the end of summer break, and for the ones that know me, know what I went through over the summer. So this is more what I was like between then and where I am now.
And though I didn’t go into it very much detail on it, I am using Twilicorn. I honestly loved the idea of making her an alicorn so it’s just assumed that she is.
The story I will warn you starts out kind of bad or slow or whatever in my own opinion, because that was my first time trying to write something. But as it goes on it gets better in quality, you can see my ability increase more and more as you read, you just have to have patients with me and this story.
I didn’t make this to be the best story on FimFiction, that’s not what I was going for at all. I could care less if it was the worst story in here. I made this story for me, because it made me feel good. So if it gets a bit repetitive or the words don’t seem to have any meaning or doesn’t sound good, know that they have great meaning to me.
And if you think of ways or things that I could have done differently or tips and so on that would make it better tell me, I’m all for a little “constructive criticism” I probably won’t change it to be honest with you, adding or taking away things from the story just doesn’t feel right to me on account on how I made it, but any input would be appreciated. I can’t learn from my mistakes if I didn't know I made them.
Just keep in mind that this story was made by a sixteen year old who’s never made a story before in his whole life what so ever, and is dyslexic. (I SPELT “dyslexic” WITHOUT AN AUTO-CORRECT!!! But I did need it to spell “autocorrect”... *sigh*) so I know this story has problems but respect it for what it is.
So other than that, enjoy the story and take care everyone...