It is 5 years after the CMC got their cutie marks and Apple Bloom is now establishing her life. With a letter to Celestia Apple Bloom has finished her progression to a mare.
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Made me smile
Very good!
4002613 If you have any specific reasons why you liked it, that would be great! Also if you want to tear it apart that's also good.
4002611 like this kind of smile
or this kind of smile 
?
That was great! It really built on the stuff they were learning in Twilight Time! Well written and adorable! It gives you that sense of 'they got their cutie marks!' that I can't wait to see in the show. Good Job, Darth! You should write more!
4002683 Again, no creativity.
4002790 Even so, it was a solid story. Thanks for the shout out in the author note as well, you didn't have to do that. You're an awesome friend!
4002822 I felt that you deserved it. Even if I only get you 5 more views it was worth it.
A very enjoyable little story. Nicely done!
4003193 Gracias
4002844 Still Thanks!
Nice, I have an idea for Applebloom, but I'll get around to it.
Very nicely done.
4002790 But what I liked the most about this was you making Apple Bloom into an Alchemist. Among all the speculated cutiemarks that she would possible get, I have never seen anything similar to that, reason why I thought that was very creative.
~Leonzilla
4094251 Well she was learning chemistry-esque things in 'Twilight Time' that's why I chose that. Like I have told many people before. I can't create information, only absorb and manipulate it.
4094269 Oh, please forgive my ignorance, I just haven't watch like seven episodes of season four yet, that one included.
Any way, you can still write excellent stories just with mere absorption and manipulation while only using a minimum amount of creativity.
)
For example the story Celestia in Excelsis mostly just manipulates what we know about the show.(Before season four
Also I liked that little detail of Twilight writing an introductory thesis in three days!
I will have to try that myself when the time comes.
~Leonzilla
4094356 well I appreciate and am happy that you enjoyed it. My other story is a journalistic fic that's moderately dark, if you like that kind of thing. Just expect the same level of crappyness that you found here.
4094395 Alright! then I will follow you.
4094424 You do that. Let me know how that's turns out for ya. In the mean time, have some mustaches
4094445 So far I like it.