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Cobrawolf_Meiji2012


Just a Writer trying to make stories. My Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/ClintHoyt and My Ko Fi: https://ko-fi.com/clinthoyt

Comments ( 54 )

Cant wait for when a velociraptor pulls a clever girl moment.

WELCOME TO JURASSIC PARK BITCHES!!

3997060 can't wait til they try to escape in the ocean only to be chased by a megalodon/ kronosaurus

3997108 Or when a muthafuckin T-rex shows up!

Celestia always seems to fuck everything up with her 'I am more holy than thou' point of view.

So... why bother with the conversion bureau backstory? :unsuresweetie:

3997208 um... Maybe.. They get attacked by GIANT. BUGS.

3997444 you don't say?
Celestia: I am a god
Me: does a set of all set contains itself?
Celestia: *seizures*

Send in Philoceraptor.

"If there's an exception to every rule, is there an exception to that rule?"

What if indeed, Philoceraptor, what if indeed.

3997448

It's a plot device to show how the ponies got here, obviously. And to be fair, this is pretty original.

3997979

yep, always have a back-story when you write a story like this, that way you can answer questions like how this all began.

3998163 It just seems like kind of a weird fit with 'a magic spell went wrong and now super-intelligent dinosaurs rule Equestria'. But I guess we haven't seen the actual story yet.

3998461

How is it any worse then 'ponies are racists who try to use that racism to justify trying to force people to have to change their bodies and let their minds be rewired before they can go to Equestria'?

And don't even try to tell me that's not what happens in TCB fics. Cause it reaches all the way back to the very first fic. And that fic made it quite clear that both are true.

This story has been examined, and found to not be in keeping with the standards for the TCB group. It has been removed.

Edit: Should you desire, I'd be happy to sit down with you (well, remain sitting) and discuss the specific reasons for the removal.

3998461
It was also a challenge made months ago in ACB and TCB.
TCB arrives and things go horribly wrong in a temporal sense.
3998897
Ah yes, your "standards". We have dismissed these claims.

Comment posted by Cloudhammer deleted Feb 25th, 2014

3998856 I have to agree with you there. the Ponies in the Original TCB were xenophobic and showed a dark side that was akin to the humans they wanted to get rid of. In this story and a few other, the ponies will also be shown as victims also of what Celestia did, telling them lies and hiding the Truth of Conversion from them.

Comment posted by Cloudhammer deleted Feb 25th, 2014

3999061

Yeah, like you have room to talk. With your attempts to try to claim you get to say what is and isn't a TCB fic. That certainly sounds like an echo from somewhere alright.

Your standards are not acceptable. Which reminds me....

There. Done. I refuse to have my story in a group laden in hypocrisy.

3998981
Indeed, whatever floats your boat. You get to make the rules of your group.
That the rules seems to ban everything that does not follow Chatty's edicts does seem suspect.
I'm all for quality control, but when your admins make a mockery of several story comment boards I find reason to question your groups integrity.
Edit:
3999146
Now you are just spamming. You made your point and we made ours. Unless you plan to have a debate in a non story forum you are just proving my points.

3999153
Just leave it, hes spamming like they did a month ago. Hes proved himself to have no care on the matter, and no integrity to back up the points made a month ago.
3999174
Feel free to delete any spam posts. This is not a debate forum and unless the comment is directly related to the story, you should remove them.

Comment posted by Cloudhammer deleted Feb 25th, 2014
Comment posted by Cloudhammer deleted Feb 25th, 2014

3999120


Yeah, we've had this discussion before on your group and ours. Yours claimed they get to say what a TCB group is or isn't. Needless to say, I disagree with that. You don't get to say something is 'TCB enough'. Because you don't get to tell authors whether or not their fics are TCB in any way, shape, or form. Which is something your group arbitrarily decided they get to do. They don't. Period. Whether or not you want a story in your group? THAT you get to say. But whether or not something is 'TCB enough'? No. No you in fact do NOT get to say that.

well, the story idea came with a question 'what if something happened to the Barrier that cases conversion to go horribly wrong?' the first idea for it backfiring is that the Humans use the Barrier against the Ponies and turn them Human, I scraped that idea as it might have been already done. Then the idea of the Ponies turning to anthro ponies, decided against that. then I had the idea of a Crazy human using the Barrier for his own even more evil plans and cause it to go haywire.

and That is what helped gave me the idea for this story.:pinkiecrazy:

3999174

I've got a story that basically flips the concept around, where the ponies have to convert into humans to survive Equestria being subsumed by Earth (minus the mind alterations seen in the original TCB fic and many of the fics that follow in its wake), but that's not quite the same thing as what you just suggested. That would actually be kinda fun if the barrier ITSELF were suddenly to turn ponies into humans. Hell, that would be downright friggin HILARIOUS. Do eet! :pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by Cloudhammer deleted Feb 25th, 2014

3999208

Really? :duck: REALLY? You use the phrase 'TCB enough', and then try to turn around and say I came up with it when I'm using YOUR terminology to point out the wrongness of it?

...You what, screw it. Ebon is right. You're pretty much just spamming now. Go away.

Oh God, what's happening in the comment section.

This looks like it could be the craziest thing since... eh... It's not a comedy? This probably won't work as a "serious" story, to be honest.

The other thing is that you should get someone to pre-read and/or edit your writing, as there are lots of typos and some misspellings and such. Also you should get rid of the cursive.

Nevertheless, this is an unexpected surprise of a story, I'll give you that.

4000391

I do, as a matter of fact.

4000517

I dunno, I think this could work as a serious story. It's no stranger than anything else out there.

4002006

Uh...maybe. What do you need'em for?

Comment posted by kyle131996 deleted Feb 26th, 2014

4003049

Heh. Hmm. I could PM them, but if you wanted them on email, couldn't do anything.

Not bad. I like what you've done with the Raptors, d00d. :ajsmug:

4005141

Thanks, I had the idea of giving the male Deinonychus a mane of feathers because in bird (the only living Theropod Dinosaurs left.), the males are very colorful to attract the females. so why not the same thing for the Non-Avian Dinosaurs?

Not bad, I like it. Will there be any mention of humanity by the various other races, or do the Raptors and other races not know about them?

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I feel like beating my head against a wall curious. Send them my way as well.

4008447

Sure thing. I'll send'em in a few.

edit: Scratch that. My imageshack account got switched over to this new BS where you have to subscribe to use it. PM me your email addy though and I can send the screencaps that way.

Hue-mon. *smirk* I like it.
Ideas.
Encounter with a kronosaurus. (If Luna tries to escape in the sea.)
Dinosaur stampede. (Wynaut?)
Giant bugs, (spiders. Seriously, spiders.)

Spanish speaking velociraptor? Fucking. Brilliant.

6015792 hey thats racista because im spanish

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