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Cobrawolf_Meiji2012


Just a Writer trying to make stories. My Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/ClintHoyt and My Ko Fi: https://ko-fi.com/clinthoyt

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This shows Promise. And I look forward to reading more. Take a Like and a Fav. :pinkiehappy:

Is the barbarian thing a reference to Diablo 3? If it is I know i'm gonna love it! Have a moustache just in case. :moustache:

Edit: You might want to do something about the wall of text, spread it out a little bit. Personally I don't really like reading walls of text. Other than that, good prologue! I love how it is written as if it was written i a book by Twilight, was that the reason for the wall of text? keep up the good work!

MLP G1 reference. UMMMMMh That's gonna be good son. :rainbowkiss:

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Yep. I saw the original MLP back when it was on Disney Channel in the early and mid 90s. Tirek was more evil in it then his newer version.

Hmmm...interesting start. I'll be following this, nice pic btw! :pinkiehappy:

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I had to find it online, the only one that had one of the characters dressed as a barbarian.

The fun has begin. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

"It is because of our dear Princess Celestia cutting military spending to unreasonable lows, we have become defenseless! All the while most of the budget is spent on CAKE!"

Good ol' Celestia :rainbowlaugh:

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Yep. I decided to put that in mainly as a reason why Equestria is unprepared for what is coming.

Also a small spoiler the wolves are not the only ones coming to Equestria

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Yep, The Wolves are just the beginning, and not all the Invaders will be so-called 'barbarians', save for how they act to the Equestrians

Also everyone, keep up with the Reviews please :)

Fluttershy will lost her innocence.

The anthro tag didn't become apparent until the previous chapter. Good story, though.

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Thanks. I decided on a Anthro story for the first time. inspired by of all things, two fanfic series: Fall of Equestra and Equestria Total War. I can already tell you that unlike the infamous FOE stories, this will not have bondage and rape all though it, even through there will be some rape scenes and more romantic parts, it will be mainly about warfare at it's worse, which was what I was planning to do with My flop known as World War Equestria.

In short: Less Clop more fighting!:rainbowdetermined2::scootangel:

4568242 I thought you were referring to JDPrime's Transformers crossover.

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Never saw that one, I might have to read it.

Wolf Barbarians? Oh hell yeah!

Me using imagination:derpyderp2::derpyderp1::
Random awesome barbarian pony: "We must avenge our brothers fall today, do not let this crimes unpunished, the time they submitted us is finish, it's time for fight my brothers, together, fight for ours princesses, fight for our land because this land is ours... (Pause) ... This is our land, THIS . IS . EQUESTRIA " :twilightangry2:
Big army of barbarian pony: "AOUH AOUH AOUH" :flutterrage:
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Me: HELL YAY!!! :yay:

So, what named/canon characters can we expect to kick the bucket?

4585066 Sounds a lot like 300 there. :yay:

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Kind of like that. I in fact based the Lycans to be like the nomadic Eurasian tribes, mainly the Scythian, Mongols, Magyar and Huns.

4584811 I think its humans Vikings based around Conan the Barbarian!

4618007 Reminds me of the Viking invasion of England by the Sons of Ragnar. Monster Vikings>Human Vikings>Normal Human>Ponies

5348712 I based it more on a mix of invasions. Also the Reindeer invaders are more or less made to be like not only the Vikings, but the Angles, Saxons and Jutes that invaded Briton at the beginning of the Dark Ages.

Equestrian Workers in a nutshell.

I especially liked the line about working 1,200 years for an immortal dictator.

This really needs to be continued, please.:pinkiehappy:

Love the title reference to Rome Total War.

Well... You have my attention.:derpytongue2:
And Celestia... Hope you like those cakes of yours with side of blood of your "best defence", aka The Element's: Aka 5 civilian's and 1 princess.

Making a story like accept its medieval ponies that invade equestrian for wealth,land and glory and it's not one hostile pony kingdom its many from a land called the Old World which is t he Europe of that world.

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