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DustyPwny


Chelis' Editor in Chief, and a Horse News writer on the side. I like animu, apparently. Send help.

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This is a story about how Pinkie mended Twilight...
Or, this is a story about Twilight learning another of friendship's valuable lessons.


Dedicated to my Uncle Kelly, a US Navy veteran, and written as a friendly reminder to everyone that you should never stop smiling.

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Dem feels :'(
I think it's nice that you would dedicate this to your uncle, sorry for your loss.

Luz

so much feels, man.

Damn... that was beautiful. :fluttercry:

summarized --> surmised

One means to sum up, the other to suppose.

3995656
It's quite alright. He passed a year ago from cancer, which is actually how Pinkie went out in the story. I didn't know him well, but he came to visit me after my grandfather passed away in 2005. It was one of the best days I've ever shared with family that lived far away.

3996532
Feels seem to be my forte right now, but I've gotta work on other feels too if I'm to write that big story later on.

3996578
Hehe. Thanks Pops.

3996788
Thanks for catching that. Now I may be able to submit it to EqD later on.

3998968 Well that's good :)

4000068
Hehe, thanks mate.

4000075 Yvw :pinkiehappy: My grandpa died a few years ago of old age, he was in the army and served in WWII so I guess we have some common ground

4000083
That's awesome, dude! I'm a big ol' bookworm when it comes to WW2, but my old man (I call him that because he took the place of my father) served in Korea and 'Nam as a field radio operator. He had some interesting stories, some of which I may have to share one day or reference in my writings. C:

it was very well written.

4000587
Ah. Thank you kindly for the feedback. :twilightsmile:

4000123 Yeah dude, I wish I talked to him more, maybe heard some stories but oh well

4000625
Ask your parents. That's how I found out that my grandfather nearly lost his jewels to a rifle round.

4000633 Shit.... Mine lost his thumb

4000637
Good grief. Looks like we've got some tough motherfuckers for granddads. :yay:

4003041 Yeah man no shit, would take balls of steal (lol) to withstand war

4003842
"I've got balls of steel." ~ Duke Nuke'm.

I'm in my seventh period class right now and the girl next to me asked what was wrong. I then realized that I was getting teary eyed. Damn you feels, damn you!

4011450
Hehe. Some people say I can capture emotion really well, especially with Twilight. Sorry to make you tear up. :fluttercry:

I started reading this and thought it was cute then you immediately desecrate my feels. :fluttercry: :ajsleepy: :applecry: WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME?! I JUST WANTED TO READ A NICE CUTE TWI X PINKIE FIC BUT INSTEAD YOU JUST DESTROY MY FEELS WITHOUT MERCY!

4867428
"Ah, I'm sorry mate." (Potential ear rape warning.)

If you were having feels, and you learned the moral of the story (I hope), then my job is complete. :scootangel:

I had read this a long time ago; but i still remember getting half way though and breaking down. I'm sure a lot of people share this same opinion when I say being an alicorn is the greatest gift and most damnable curse anypony can be given.

Before I read,

“Knock knock.”

Is somepony saying this, or is it a onomatopoeia? If it's an onomatopoeia, then it should be in italics, not quotation marks. The feels though...they hit me :fluttercry:

I cried like three times while I was reading. :raritycry:
The feeling of loss is just too much for me.. :fluttercry:

Woah. Heavy, lad. I feel fulfilled, yet... empty, at the same time. Good show. :rainbowderp:

6771678
Have some Fluttershy to fill the void. :yay:

Where was the death tag?! :fluttercry:

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