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Strythio


A fanfic writer, an aspiring general writer, shinobilegend, and aspiring engineer.

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I'm so happy to see this up after pre-reading this for you! Hope it does well!

Like it so far. Interesting take on alicorn and the royal sisters history.
I can see why after Discords defeat Sombra had to retake his throne by force seeing as everyone seem to hate him now.
I can also see why Celestia wants dream to stop. With that many skeletons in the closet, she might be facing quite a few rebelions from non pony races if this events came to light

Ok. Now I'm even more curious. What happened to Sombra? Considering the premise of this story, I'm starting to think that Sombras supposed reign of terror was nothing more the a lie Celestia came up with to hide her skeletons. The crystal hearts defense mechanism certainly proves that there was something wrong with royal sisters "ribelation " of the empire.

"Next one will definitely not be coming out this week."
That will give me time to re-read this for the changes! :pinkiehappy:

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By the end of the story, you might still have that question in your head, because you are a bit off-base as to what has so far been revealed... But to be fair, I did just publish chapter 4 tonight. ^_^


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Yep, that was the... plan? :trollestia: Yeah, let's go with that.

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:rainbowlaugh: Oh my god Celestia thats funny!

I guess it takes one to know one with chains of ambitions, doesn't it Solaria?

This is a cool story, but please break up paragraphs when a new character talks. You do most of the time, but it makes the exceptions difficult to read.

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Thanks for the compliment.

For chapter 1, went through and broke many if not all of them up. I don't think subsequent chapters have that issue (I know the latter ones do not) but just in case, give a shout out.

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