Fillies missing, towns decimated with no witnesses, and a strange force awakened in the dark Evergreen Forest. Can the magic of friendship stop a force that seeks to destroy all magic?
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Zervziel
Moderator of Protect Celestia. Aside from that I'm a prereader/writer who farts about this site to an excessive degree. Currently have three stories going at the moment.
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"Fillies missing, towns decimated with no witnesses, and a strange force awakened in the dark Evergreen Forest"
Yea that seems about right...
Basic plot to the average adventure fic. I'll give it a whirl.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
359993 I tried to put an interesting spin on it. Plus it was about 5 in the morning when i wrote that description.
Thumbs up for pretty careful spell checking; it's so easy to do yet over half of the ppl here don't do it
The dialogue could be better, though 
360231 Dialogue is one of my weaker points, but I'll do my best to improve it. It didn't detract too much did it?