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A little tale of Rainbow Dash's experiences in flight school as a filly.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 26 )

Rainbow Dash before the awesome?
IMPOSSIBLE! :flutterrage:

I am loving this so far, can't wait to see the next chapter. :rainbowkiss:

"leaving the classroom unsupervised with a classroom of young, rambunctious fillies.... "
:rainbowderp: This may be about to get real.

I'm liking this a lot so far. Characterization is good, I can definitely see younger, more innocent Dash and Gilda being exactly like this. I like the idea that Rainbow comes from a big family, and her dad is where she gets the warmer colors of her spectrum from. :rainbowlaugh: The names you picked for her sisters are good, too.

Oh, Fillyshy. You make everything you do more adorable, and everything you do makes you more adorable...:yay:
...Don't cry, Fillyshy, it'll be all right...

Yep, definitely tracking this.

358530 LOL yeah. this may be a slightly different take on Filly RD, but I'll try to keep her personality, as well as the personalities of others as close to the actual show as I can, while still enjoying my writing at the same time!

Thanks for the comment!:pinkiehappy:

358778 Great to hear feedback! :pinkiehappy: I just posted chapter 4, go check it out, tell your brony friends, and most importantly, have a great day!

Thanks for the comment!:twilightsmile:

359027 Hope you like where I'm taking this! I have some great ideas for this story that I can't wait to keep going with!

Thanks for the comment, and have a great day!:ajsmug:

Well guys, I've been thinking. Should I try to add some of the rest of the mane six into this as fillies, or should I stay in the direction that I'm headed?

Feedback would be great, and don't forget to comment, your input is always appreciated!

Thanks, and have a great day!:rainbowkiss:

Ugh... I'd like to give that group a piece of my mind. Anypony in the mood for some cupcakes? :pinkiecrazy:

Another chapter NAAAAAAOOOOOWWW:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I see where this is going. :pinkiehappy:

382757 I'll get one out as soon as possible! Great to see you're enjoying it!

Thanks for the comment, and have a great day!

383148 I'm actually planning something a bit different, but don't worry, once I get further along in the story I think I'll get to what you're thinking!

Anyway, thanks for the comment, and have a great day!

383321 Oh! Well that will keep things even more interesting then I suppose! Plus you are a great writer from what I've seen, so it will be great either way!

:yay: I love this story :heart:

Now I'm pissed, how dare they laugh at RD?!

New chapter! New chapter! (gonna start a riot of there isn't one soon!)

386917 I'll get a new chapter up ASAP. I've been working on other projects and my computer has been acting up latley. Also, I just saw the new episode and my views of the characters always seem to change a bit after each one, but I'll try my best to keep on the same track with this story.

Thanks for the comment, and have a great day!

Interesting twist on the race. :pinkiegasp:

Alright, this is great. Redefining Gilda's personality to make their friendship plausible, reinforcing Dashies loyalty and... well, pretty much everything else. Would like to see where this goes.

374533Yes, for once that sounds nice. Wonder what the light of the moon tastes like?

Hmm... May I help you bake?
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435775 Yeah, It was my own little variation, but I hope that you enjoy it so far!

There's a new chapter up by the way, so check it out if you want to! :pinkiesmile:

Thanks for the comment, and have a great day!

841493 Glad to hear you like it! I have plans for the future of this, all I really have to do is write them down and not get distracted.

Yeah, that last part may be a bit difficult. :derpytongue2:

Thanks for telling me what you liked about it too, that stuff i always really helpful.

And lol that pic creeps me out :twilightoops:

Anyways, thanks for the comment and have a great day!

Everyone who laughed at rd was a bitch, Gilda was just sittin there beong badass and not bein a bully!

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