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TittySparkles


TittySparkles is pretty based, writes great porn that I can rub one off to on a weekly basis, and she has no problem telling societies leftie rejects to fuck off. - Anonymous

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I have no comment on the story because I looked to the right and saw the post under your name and started laughing my ass off.

That's at least four of my fetishes.

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Words

Never did get a change to flip through this before you published...

Ah well. This was certainly something!

~Skeeter The Lurker

Awesome. :rainbowkiss:

After i read this, i said to myself: is this tittysparkles?! This best not be tittysparkles!! ... FUCK!!!! (Still favorited. Good work you sick son of a bitch.)

Ah, this little series from Derpibooru. I look forward to reading the literary version!

this arouses me on every level
write more, titty, you glorious winged basterdess

Sequel about redheart and the symbiotic tentacle?

I do not know enough ways to thank you for writing this, because it is amazing and you are amazing and wow. :heart:

This is what I type on 4 hours of sleep. Heh

Is this by any chance based on David Cronenburg's 'Shivers'?

*Looks at story picture* Dat butt tho :derpytongue2:

Redheart isn't the only one that expelled a lot of fluids. :rainbowkiss:

so its gonna kill her?

This is just asking for a sequel~ With preggy Nurse and devious cock

3962624 don't you mean chance?

Y U Change PIC! luckily I already saved the old one. Now to copy the new one.

*Sigh* Where to begin with this one...
See, while I realize that there are people who are into this sort of thing- and trust me, I'm not judging you for your sexual preferences- there are still many, MANY things wrong with this fic. The writing style is choppy, the dialogue sounds like something out of a badly written porno (which, for all I know, is the goal), and there are some minor grammatical errors sprinkled in there for good measure. That being said, I've taken the liberty to point out the absolute WORST parts of this fic:

As she walked by a certain piece of farmland, her father waved from his field as she trotted by. Redheart laughed and waved back. Her father had his sense of humor that only the two of them could fully understand, and he was proud of his daughter. True, he was a farmer, and his daughter was a Qualified Medical Doctor with a degree from Manehattan Medical College, but he didn't care. He knew he had raised Redheart well.
Redheart too was glad she had a father like him. She wasn’t as strong like Applejack, but had a body toned to perfection much like she did. And if she hadn't been raised as a farmer’s daughter, well, she might not be as good as she was. She trotted forwards once more and her father returned to plowing his field.

Seeing nothing, she went back to whatever it was that was occupying her.

Thank you for being so incredibly detailed with your writing, author!

Redheart knew nothing of its presence and began to envision what it would be like to be with a stallion for the first time. The size of their huge, meaty cocks penetrating her hot, wet holt with anything but dignity and grace. Her hoof moved down towards her pussy as she imagined herself being rutted while sucking off another stallion, spit roast style. A daily ritual for the mare; as much as she wanted a stallion, she knew her own body better than anypony else and settled for a hoof. The creature watched her as she masturbated, but it decided to let her get to a heightened level of arousal, not wanting to scare her when it made its appearance, and slid slowly into the water without a sound.

Why, how incredibly convenient that she was thinking about getting fucked right before a giant sentient dildo came to fuck her!
Now, you may be asking yourself "If you hate the story so much, why comment on it?" Well, dear readers/author, because this was so mind-bogglingly terrible and yet it made it onto the spotlight section of the site. Normally, I would ignore this sort of fic, but after seeing God-knows how many of these fics, I decided "What the hell! Why not give this one a try! And you know what? This fic somehow managed to entertaine me. Kind of in the same way The Room entertains me, or Batman and Robin entertains me. So... Thank you for this experience... I guess. :unsuresweetie:
Now, proceed with your hate.

This story is disgusting lesson to women that refuse to carry sexual life and to give birth:
"If you behave as the stinker,angry tentacle will come crawling and will bang you. And the only thing that you give a birth - vaginal worms. :rainbowlaugh:

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It's cool, I understand your point for this fic and I actually wanted to nuke that first quoted bit you showed. It seemed pointless for the fic but for some reason I never got to delete it. As for the rest of the fic my other collaborator wrote a large proportion of it while I did my best to iron it out and make it more presentable. I know I lacked in that department.

I ain't gonna hate. You pointed out visible flaws and I respect someone who isn't afraid to tell it to me straight. :twilightsmile:

I'm sorry but I couldn't help but laugh when the tentacle first revealed itself to Redheart. The mental image was too funny. Regardless, I think this has potential.

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*Points out "incomplete" tag*
*Waits for realization to sink in.*

different from most of Ponyville’s mares for that matter. what many didn't know was

Forgot to capitalize.


Well this is certainly interesting....

The tentacle reminds me of the condom from "Killer Condom" all cute until it reveals its true nature

That was... interesting. I can only sense bad things in the future, though.

With a parasite that big inside her, I don't think Redheart's gonna last long.

Curiosity killed the cat...but satisfaction brought him back.

Tentical fics always irk me. For one thing, I have yet to see a single one that does not end with "the sex thing wins. They were ficked ever after."
Secondly, such a reproduction process would never work. The biology would not be comparable, and if they sex everything forever, they would drive themselves into extinction along with their hosts.

3967476 If only there were other writers out there that take criticism as well as you! :rainbowlaugh: Glad I didn't offend you!

3971919 retro horror fic made by Trauma Studios. You'll need subtitles unless you understand german but it's a great horror B movie

3972810 No thanks. I think I got trama from just hearing that name. That's enough internet for the night.

It's almost impressive how much this author can scar my mind without even reading it yet

Intriguing. I do have something of a fascination with tentacle rape. I'll see where this goes.

Triggers: Tentacles, Impregnation, and Cum Inflation

Sounds like it's gonna be a fun time! I only think I may not like the last one, and depending on where the tentacles go, I my not like them, either.

3973813 what I said had nothing to do with magic.

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Parasites are capable of reproducing with themselves, so it's entirely possible that this creature is capable of asexual reproduction, and simply requires a host to act as both an incubator and a source of nourishment. A symbiotic companionship, as it were, because I'm sure the host would definitely die if the creature fed too much from them.

There are very strange creatures in the world, after all. It wouldn't surprise me if something that grew off vaginal lubricant was fully capable of both nourishing itself, and reproducing by itself.

3971702

Because in the end, we read a tentafic for the sex. Could always include it in a bigger story, of course, but I've only heard of one case that did it like that, and that was Fallout: Equestria.

And the result of that tentacle rape was life or death, pretty much. Lucky for the main character, it didn't happen, but yeah. All the same.

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3975729 you are correct that it is possible for a parasite to exist in the way you describe, but it is not probibal in the way most tentafics describe. Those (this one included) are completely parasitic relationships with only the tentacle thing being benifited by using their hosts reproductive systems to nurture their offspring. And at times their host is made to stay in this position or have everybody they see also become a host.

TittySparkles strikes gold once again!

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Indeed, but in the end, it's all up to our interpretation, right? We've seen things concerning tentacles that imply a parasitic relationship, and things that imply a symbiotic relationship.

Hell, I wouldn't mind writing a symbiotic relationship where the tentacle and the pony benefit each other. Just have to think of how it'd work...

...Oh.

Ohohoho.

Oh, there's an idea. There's the idea! HA! I'm a genius!

3977097 the only "benifit" I've ever seen in a tentafic is " they can get sex easily."
But if you have an idea that isn't just "the mare gets sex," I must sat I'm interested.
I mean really. The closest I could get is a goo pony falling in love with a regular pony after trying to apologize for going all tentacle on her.

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It's not so much a tentacle being, than a spell gaining a personality. The idea I've got actually stems from a field of magic me and a friend developed for an RP we're DMing.

Basically, magic is divided into several schools, all falling under four different types of mana. This covers types of mana.

You've got Light, Neutral, Dark, and Corrupt. Light is the purest of the four, being energy refined and focused by the unicorn in question during a spell, capable of expelling a lot of energy and carving through objects in blasts of light. Neutral comprises the foundation of pretty much every spell in the proverbial book, and is the most balanced of the four. Dark is a much more physical type that comprises many defensive and physical-movement spells, as well as the creation of extra limbs from the horn that a pony can use. Finally, there's Corrupt, which is a viral-type mana that devours and spreads as quickly and ravenously as possible, often turning ponies into piles of muck by decomposing their cells and converting it into more mana. It's so powerful that it cuts through the ground and builds whole hive-like caverns filled with a deadly mist.



The mana in question here is Dark mana, and that it affects the mind. If a tendril is used often enough, it can become 'unique', developing its own personality as a derivative of a pony's darker wants and emotions. Often times, the tendril is playful, a prankster, and not very mindful of others' feelings, and, in some cases, quite perverted.

But, it still holds a basis in magic, and the fact that it's a separate mind with its own sensory information, it can actually create its own spells if the base mist it was constructed from is large enough. So, basically, you get two spellcasters for the cost of one, and a unicorn who's created a strong relationship with that other personality becomes very deadly, as every bit of Dark mana they exude and use can be used just as efficiently - and deadly - by the separate personality.

This also leads to very funny arguments with the typical 'voice in your head' trope. Which I find unbearably hilarious.

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