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Traumkampfer


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I can already tell this is gonna be good. And by the looks of it, I guess Pip is the Luka of this?

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Yes, Pip is the Luka of this story (I cant think of anypony more suited). Glad to see another fan of the game :pinkiesmile:

I wont be following the games plot exactly, but its following the theme ^^

3951758 Sounds about right. So what exactly will the story contain? Similar elements and decent story, similar elements and awesome story or just all-around sex and not much story?

This looks like fun, I'll wait a little bit until there's more to read before I go through it. Glad to see more fans of the game on here.

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Well, I'm not the best writer in the world, but the main focus of the story is not sex (only planning on one, perhaps two scenes at the most) I've got 2 more chapters waiting for my proofreader to finish, and my main goal is for it to be entertaining and funny ^^

I'm working in 2 of the Heavenly Knights and the spirits as well (cant think of who could be Tamomo and Erubite though :/ )

3954831 Tamamo is wise and calm in most cases and in others, she's very playful and/or seductive. Hmm. Luna sounds like she could fill that role, or even Cadence (if she ever made an appearance). Erubetie...is the very definition of a cold-hearted bitch. So NMM, Chrysalis or someone else fits the role perfectly

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True, however, Chrysalis is already Alice, and We've established Luna doesn't exist :rainbowwild:

Know that Ilias watches through her followers.

3956783 Could always genderbend some male characters that could fit the role that you can't fit in the tags. Like Sombra. Sombra would be the perfect Erubetie

I like it


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Don't worry guys, I'm gonna be finishing this story (Though I may shorten a few of the story elements from the game)

I'm so glad people like this story, was worried everyone would be weirded out :derpytongue2:

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Sorry, I had to dress up Pip as a pirate at some point :pinkiesmile:
(plus I'm not doing a 100% full pony version of the game, so this is the point where Luka and Alice sail from Ilias Island)

I'm giddy with excitement for the next chapter.

Dexter Laboratory... seriously?

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I just couldn't help it, I loved Dexters Lab as a kid, and Pinkamena is a doctor :derpytongue2:

Swab, not swap. You turned one letter upside-down! :derpytongue2:

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Oops, I blame my grammar checker xD
On the bright side: have the final chapters all typed up, just gotta run them by him and upload them one by one when he has the time to check them :twilightsheepish:

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Yes, I love Castlevania, so had to make a couple references to that :trollestia:
Besides, the whip is ponykinds most powerful weapon :rainbowlaugh:

4857076 what if the reason Dracula lasts so long is because he likes it?

:trixieshiftright:So, wait. If your now done with this story, (Which I enjoyed from start to finish), why does the notification still say 'incomplete'?

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Oops! I forgot to change that. Thanks for telling me, and thanks a whole bunch for liking my story! :pinkiehappy:

Ya' know... I've only read up to this second chapter but... would you be so kind as to write some alternate endings where he loses to the enemies he encounters? If so, I along with some numerous fans of MGQ would appreciate it.

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I understand completely where your coming from, just my editor and I made it into a joke, to see if I could write a story that is so based on sexual things, and manage to have no sex at all in it.

This isn't a clopfic, I was debating on adding it possible as an extra chapter, but I cant say if it will happen :/

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I feel so left out, what is the crossover in this story, and where can I find the original game?

5654869 Its a crossover between MLP, and Monster Girl Quest, a hentai game. I dont know if you can legally buy the game since Japan doesn't usually sell their adult games to westerners, but you'll find it if you look for it ;)

will there be a sequel or a alternate story?

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I dont find that idea likely, as I dont write fanfics very often. I think I ended this on a note that I am happy with.

LMAO "Get out of my la-bor-a-tory!" Oh, I miss that show!

Not wanting to lose my momentum, I began flailing the sword wildly at her, hitting the changeling repeatedly until she finally surrendered and flew away, shouting profanities

MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA

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