3951758 Sounds about right. So what exactly will the story contain? Similar elements and decent story, similar elements and awesome story or just all-around sex and not much story?
Well, I'm not the best writer in the world, but the main focus of the story is not sex (only planning on one, perhaps two scenes at the most) I've got 2 more chapters waiting for my proofreader to finish, and my main goal is for it to be entertaining and funny ^^
I'm working in 2 of the Heavenly Knights and the spirits as well (cant think of who could be Tamomo and Erubite though :/ )
3954831 Tamamo is wise and calm in most cases and in others, she's very playful and/or seductive. Hmm. Luna sounds like she could fill that role, or even Cadence (if she ever made an appearance). Erubetie...is the very definition of a cold-hearted bitch. So NMM, Chrysalis or someone else fits the role perfectly
3956783 Could always genderbend some male characters that could fit the role that you can't fit in the tags. Like Sombra. Sombra would be the perfect Erubetie
I can already tell this is gonna be good. And by the looks of it, I guess Pip is the Luka of this?
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Yes, Pip is the Luka of this story (I cant think of anypony more suited). Glad to see another fan of the game
I wont be following the games plot exactly, but its following the theme ^^
3951758 Sounds about right. So what exactly will the story contain? Similar elements and decent story, similar elements and awesome story or just all-around sex and not much story?
This looks like fun, I'll wait a little bit until there's more to read before I go through it. Glad to see more fans of the game on here.
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Well, I'm not the best writer in the world, but the main focus of the story is not sex (only planning on one, perhaps two scenes at the most) I've got 2 more chapters waiting for my proofreader to finish, and my main goal is for it to be entertaining and funny ^^
I'm working in 2 of the Heavenly Knights and the spirits as well (cant think of who could be Tamomo and Erubite though :/ )
3954831 Tamamo is wise and calm in most cases and in others, she's very playful and/or seductive. Hmm. Luna sounds like she could fill that role, or even Cadence (if she ever made an appearance). Erubetie...is the very definition of a cold-hearted bitch. So NMM, Chrysalis or someone else fits the role perfectly
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True, however, Chrysalis is already Alice, and We've established Luna doesn't exist
3956783 Could always genderbend some male characters that could fit the role that you can't fit in the tags. Like Sombra. Sombra would be the perfect Erubetie
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I feel so left out, what is the crossover in this story, and where can I find the original game?