Um... I guess I'll put something interesting here when I can think of it. I just wanna share my sily pony stories. *Shrug*
Every year, six young ponies from each of the six traitor’s districts are chosen to come to Canterlot Central and fight to the death as punishment for the traitorous acts of the ex-bearers of the Elements of Harmony. This is the thousandth year after the end of the civil war and the death of Princess Luna, the year of the thousandth Harmony Games. Will one small Pegasus from the agricultural district be able to make a difference? Will she even be able to survive?
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A Hunger Games crossover?
I am conflicted! I love ponies and i loved the book, but the idea of ponies being that barbaric? It scares me a little.
Eh, I'm open-minded. I'll read it in the morning when I'm conscious enough to comprehend writing. I swear though, if you hurt Fluttershy, to the moon with you then!
I joke of course. I'll post a better reaction later. But for now, sleep.
Hmmm, may i suggest putting a little more description into your writing? just as a bit of friendly advice, right now it sounds a little cold.
Otherwise, this is one of the few stories i will have on my tracking list.
Thanks for the comment. I'll try to work on being more descriptive in the upcomming chapters.
Life finally let me get back at this story. I have to say so far it seems pretty solid. You've done a good job adapting the lifestyle of the districts to ponies. The wing clipping was a nice touch. I'm curious to see what kind of punishments the unicorns live with.
If there's any improvement to be made, I would suggest adding more detail to your writing. Some of the sections could have used more detail and felt rushed in my opinion. For example, you described the Games well but said little about the districts other than they exist. You could go into detail about how many there are (Im assuming one for each element?) And what each one does. I'm also curious how you will handle Celestia. You said she regretted the war, yet she had no issue jumping straight to televised mass murder sports. I assume Celestia will make an appearance and I would like to see how you justify her choices with her personality.
If it seems like I've been overly critical I apologize. I'm just a big fan of the series
. This is honestly a very good start and I'm looking forward to how you will mix these two series
. Keep up the good work and may luck be ever on your side
.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment!
I'll work on adding some more detail in the upcoming chapters. Celestia is going to appear and (I hope) it will be clear why she made the choices she did by the end. The districts will get fleshed out a bit when the other Chosen ponies come in, but there are indeed six of them.
This looks very intreging
It's no durr that Dusty gonna be picked
guess what Nee-chan?? I joined FIMFiction just so I could read your fic!
I know you're busy, but I WANT MORE!!!!!! 
well atleast this isnt a copy, good for you, have a thumb
Thanks for the comments guys. I know you're all saying "Where is the next chapter? Why are you taking so long? Get off your lazy bum and write filly!"
Well, it's coming, slowly, but it's coming. I'm also revising the first chapters to be more descriptive and (hopefully) better than they are now. I'm really hoping to kick it in gear with this over the next month or so as a warmup to NaNoWriMo.
Meanwhile, here are ponycreator versions of Featherlight (Dusty) and Redneck. Enjoy
Edit: Whoops, forgot Red's cutiemark. For the record, it's one of these collar thingies arthursclipart.org/horses/horses/collar.gif
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