Terry wakes up one day, thinking it all a dream. What happens in this 'dream' is more than he can handle.
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That was an interesting dark story, I liked it
DAMN!
WHAT A TWIST!!!!!!!!!!
It's sad when a competently-written and imaginative story gets so few views. I don't know what it is. Is it really just that people need a picture before they'll read a story? Is it because the one-line summary doesn't promise a straightforward classic plot structure?
"When my caretakers talked, they told truths at me. They never told truths to each other." - Nice.
"Where they fearful of me?" => Were they fearful of me?
It was just a few thoughts before it became into something more useful. => It was just a few thoughts before it became something more useful.
Near the end I just wanted it to be over; it was too gruesome for me.
This is well-done for what it is, but writing about extremely emotionally disturbed people is taking the easy way out. Can you write a story about an ordinary person doing ordinary things that's interesting?
Just wow I never read anything so vivid.....
So Graphic... O.O i will say one thing its very good
I'm not sure what I've read exactly but I'm more than certain I like it. A nice short story with an excellent twist and good storytelling. I don't think a dark short story can get any better than this.
You portray insanity with skill so great I'm actually kind of concerned for you.