Hopeless Romantic

Twilight never really liked Hearts and Hooves day. It was just a slap in the face every year, so why bother?

This year, Twilight wants to make it different than before. Twilight enlists the help of Rarity, and they try to find the perfect match for the lavender mare.

Results vary.

[Sex tag for small hint of sex language at the end]

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Comment posted by Blazing Cat deleted Feb 10th, 2014

Flying Fantasy Horse

Flying Fantasy Horse #2 · Feb 10th, 2014 · · ·

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I had no idea. I just came up with a generic stallion in two seconds, so he could be anypony honestly.

Rough_Draft

Rough_Draft #3 · Feb 10th, 2014 · 2 · ·

It's a bit rushed, but otherwise nice. Just as a word of advice: you don't need to always add "he commented" or "she rationalized" when it's obvious from the dialogue.

Still, good work!

MythrilMoth

MythrilMoth #4 · Feb 10th, 2014 · · ·

This needs heavy editing. There are a LOT of grammar and spelling errors.

panzerbrony

panzerbrony #5 · Feb 10th, 2014 · 1 · ·

HAHAHAHAHA! DAT SCENE IN THE NIGHT CLUB!

Zeyon The Green

Zeyon The Green #6 · Feb 11th, 2014 · · ·

Twilight, you are one of a kind.

Hillbe

Hillbe #7 · Jul 28th, 2014 · · ·

Twi called up to Spike " Spike? SPIKE !" "What cha want Twi " He answered,
"Get down here Rarity's all yours, I give up with this hearts & goofs day" Twi grumbled.
"Dearest Celestia ? How did you know?' Rar cooed.
"All of Equestria knows, just get it over with, It's bad enough being an egg head ,Just keep the noise down to a quiet roar"