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Cobalt the Kitsune


Smile, even when you're breaking up inside

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Luna finds herself on a train to Trottingham. She is on her way to find some pony she hadn't seen for years now. Her daughter, named Shadow Saber, whom she birthed in the first year after her release from the moon. For her sister's sake Celestia suggested to let Shadow be raised by a surrogate. Now, nearly 16 years later she has come to bring her daughter home. But reuniting a teenager to a parent she's never know might be more difficult than it seems.

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Well, I like it.
I'm telling you because I FEELnlike it

Luna's a bitch

3932356 Why do you say that? It's Celestia who made Luna give shadow up for the pride of the Alicorn's

3932748 Sure, I do blame celestia in this too, but luna was the one who had to make the choice, for example she could have ran away in the night with shadow and lived a normal life until the time came and she had to tell her. But she had to give her up and then 15 years later take her away from the only family she has and begin a new life with another, do you know how selfish luna is right now?

3934584 Perhaps that;s going to some of the mommy/daughter drama that drives the story. And It's not like she never going to see Katana ever again. Plus what would you do if you learned that your were born of royalty and offered a life in a luxurious place?

3935453 yes, but still, luna is selfish for dragging shadow away from her 'true' mother. Shadow loves her mom (Katana), and luna is taking that away from her, sure she will be able to visit and shit but still, look at this from shadow perspective, how would you feel?

3935622 Shadow has always wondered who she is along with who she belonged too. She now had a change to find out. This is her first time to really go out on a journey of self discovery.

3936003 Whatever, it's your story, and you can do what you want.

3936460 well I'm sorry we have differing opinions...:fluttershysad:

3936614 We can still be friends right? :rainbowkiss:

3938812 of course man (or woman whatever the case may be) :ajsmug:

3938812 He you seem to have good idea's on internal conflict that would be created durring this situation... Really I haven't expounded on these charaters yet. Perhaps... you would like to help write some of this:twilightblush:

3939143 depends, how much help? I can defiantly give advice.

3939131 P.S. I'm a guy........ (fades away)

3940321 How ever much you would like.

3940626 Well, let's start with you asking questions, and I answer them to the best of my ability.

3941637 well lets do it over PM hmmn?

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