You are a U.S. Soldier and become wounded in battle. After getting air-lifted to a nearby hospital, or so you thought, you realize you're completely lost. How will you react to this new world? How will you get home? Second person, and humanized.
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Like where this is going.
354785 Thank you. I like any and all feedback.
I like it so far.
Though the perspective takes a little getting used to.
Want moar.
I never was a big fan of 2nd person, it always confused me
But I think I'll get over it
354924 I always enjoyed reading second person, so I thought, why not write second person?
Arg! More second person!
Oh well, wish you the best.
354955 Thanks, sorry about second person. I always enjoyed reading it, decided to write in it.
354976
's cool. I've just seen and read so many lately that I'm burned out on them. I can never see the second person as 'me' I always see it as someone else so they're wasted on me anyway.
I swear before this fandom I had only ever read like one second person fic ever before here. Now they're like leaking out everywhere. Anyway, carry on you'll find fans as long as your quality is good.
355005 I hope the everyone who reads this enjoys it. Actually working on the next chapter now, gonna upload it some time this weekend. Probably Saturday. Thanks for the feedback.
354908 You will get more soon. Either tomorrow or Saturday.
great story so far
355143 Thank you. New chapter soon.
Great story so far, but I'm getting the vibe that the Mane 6 (let alone any other ponies) are anthro characters by the soldiers initial impression of them. Is this the case? Because he didn't seem to react to oddly to Fluttershy when he first saw her.
i like the idea of everypony being everyone faceing something unknow like war, but keping the ponyfacts like flying and magic
'nuff said
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Hmm. I like the opening, high octane thrills and the battle scene is fairly solid and realistic
Three technical details:
1.) Is the the soldier a US Army soldier or a US Marine? Those two terms are not interchangable.
2.) The correct protocol for radio use is callsign of whoever you're calling and then your call sign. Ex: "Base, this is Sandman 1-3" NOT "Sandman 1-3 to base"
3.) Write out numbers less than one hundred.
Um, are the ponies humanized, anthro or "normal forms"?
355530 He is a soldier, did I call him a marine? I don't remember, sorry if I did. As for call-sign errors, sorry. I did some research to try to make this as accurate as possible, guess I missed that. Numbers less than 100, I knew, just forgot. Thanks for the feedback.
355790 They are humanized, but still have their wings/horns.
355350 Thank you, this is the first fan-fic I've ever uploaded.
I am liking this story, consider it a track, fav and a thumb up! Second person eh? Winning!
356574 Thanks, expect a new chapter either tonight or tomorrow.
one canot simply be medivaced into ponyville! great story and the second person aspect is very interesting.
358578 Thank you.
Please sir can I have some MOAR?
359875 Working on it now. Upload tomorrow, depending on when I wake up.
Please tell me you didn't get all of this information from playing too much CoD...
Anyways, nice story!
Why do people aways think we play too much CoD? It's getting annoying
Wow. This rewritten prologue is much better than the previous. I'm looking forward for more.
1747475
Thanks! I really like it too.
Damn, this story so far has an immersion level only rivaled by Battlefield 3's story.
Well done.
1817328 That means a lot to me!
I like this story so far, really hope to see some more updates.
Is it dead? *poke with stick*
What about a story about a human who wakes up as a NORMAL type of pony in Equestria (Earth, Pegasus, Unicorn) opposed to a human, or an Alicorn, or one of the so-called "secondary" tribes?