Stories, stories, stories and more stories. Maybe some reading as well or maybe recordings of reading stories. Stories and more stories and maybe just maybe I could do a reading of someone's story? No
Everfree, Angel of Nature, has over stepped his bounds as said Angel. He has interfered with the natural selection of life and has been banished for it and instead of being sent to Earth like the Archangel had told him, he has been sent to Equis as the Angel and Guardian of Equis, but even with help from his Nature Powers, can he keep Equis safe? Rating is subject to change.
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THIS!? is your first story!? wow man good job i gotta say its really well written for the first 2 chapters i cant wait to see the others :D
the way you write it it sounds like this was a sequel to something but it cant be since its the first story ill keep looking for updates though
This is your first story.... i envy your writist talent.
This truly is a good story!
"What use is an unloaded gun?"- Tony
Nightmare daniel demon king of the shadows
Oh, its getting interesting ^^
This is fascinating!!
I'm vaguely reminded of tyrael from Diablo
Your writing style is very good! You could make the chapters longer, but I'm not complaining. Keep up the good work!
Ooh! Ever free likes little Twily! Awesome work with this!
Is this story a sequel to anything?
RougeVoxel this is not a sequel to anything, it's just the way I wanted it to be done but I am thinking of doing a prequel of sorts.
Good chapter! Glad you finally updated!
Just fix up your spelling a little and you've got a really good story so far. I'm interested my friend.
A prequel to this would be pretty cool!
Ok i see absolutely nothing wrong with this in terms of writing so thats a ten(some quirks here and there but those were dismissed due to writing style)
over all i give this story a 9/10(i have given a ten to exactly four people. will you be the next?)
~Nightmare Daniell61 King of the Demonic Shadows
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I intirely agree with you... we need a prequel to this Lord Nopony :3
and are you new here? i havent seen you around
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I'm somewhat new. I just changed my profile name is all. I used to be called XemnasTheDarkLord. If you want, check out my story Under The Eye of Darkness
Good chapter!
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There's a little something called the reply button. Hope that helps.
Very interesting. Keep up the good work!
Yeesh! Talk about creepy eh?
>> Lord Nopony
I know right, but I couldn't help but put that in there.
Oh dear...that Chrysalis is sneaky!
>> Lord Nopony
She's the Queen of Changelings for a reason isn't she?
Whoa! What an awesome Interlude!
4195657 fancy seeing you here.
Not voided, broken, not nullified, shattered. Voided and nullified would both mean that the oath no longer applies and therefore he would have done nothing wrong.
Why'd he bring them out before explaining himself that was dumb
You should reveal his real name as Tehvah, the Hebrew word for nature.
**Thanos snaps**
For its time and from an obviously young writer, its not a bad story. Sadly, it is from the era in Fimfiction that is the equivalent to the 1980's TV shows. Corny dialog, silly hair, etc.
No thumbs up, but no thumbs down either. Stories like these are great time capsules and should be read for the nestalgia. Whith out these stories and Authoors doing their thing, we would never have matured to see the great stories of the classic era to now.
Monk
"Yes, I will eat the Fear Turkey." -Illua