A story of two silly ponies,Pinkie and Fluttershy.The things they will be passing by and the story with other ponies,they will never forget.
A story of two silly ponies,Pinkie and Fluttershy.The things they will be passing by and the story with other ponies,they will never forget.
Hmm... I like were you are going with this you just got to work on some spelling and sentence placement things, otherwise nice story....
or first chapter of a story.
I...
Will...
Be....
Watching....
3903523 Thank you very much! I know that I made some mistakes,and thanks for pointing that out.I will be awared of that in further writing.
PS.I know that I made spelling mistakes,but oh well,mistakes happen and I'll fix that through the other chapters.
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~SilverWind9~
Your welcome! Always happy to help
3906398 Thanks again! :)