Do you ever stop? Wow, I like this.

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Since September I didn't have a week without writing...

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Holy balls, this is so awesome that I can't even find a good analogy for it.

Vinyl smiled behind her turntables. She saw that the cookies she brought almost disappeared, devoured by the guests.

Look a flashback within a flashback
FLASHCEPTION

Soooo good!!

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Actually, it happens quite often in my stories. I think I went even deeper once, but then I thought that it was too much and changed it.

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LOL my sides hurt so much, I forgot how to breathe....

CONTINUE THIS... NAWOOOOOOO; NEED MORE!

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I'm about 2k into the third chapter, so don't worry And thanks for the fav

This probably says a lot about me, but the dumber this story gets, the harder I laugh.
Nice job!

is it possible to color the text for the different ponies. The bedroom scene is a little hard to follow when all give are talking back and forth.

“I had a dream that I became a gunner on an airship and Cloudchaser was trying to shoot me.”

This line means a lot more to me, now.

To fight with my fears and face the wheels…

Can't... stop... laughing...

On the other side of the coin, I really like Vinyl's characterization in this. She's kinda sad, really. First time I read this, I was cheering inside when she finally got that kiss she'd been after. The characterization in this is just great in general, though.

“I’d rather call it ‘pissing contest’, but we can agree on ‘family feud’, if you like,” Bon Bon replied.

I once saw a literal pissing contest once...at my school...the participants are both on a list now.

“Okay, don’t worry. By the way, I think I’ll call my next album ‘Who The Fuck Is Lyra Heartstrings’...” She smiled and blinked at him. He sighed with relief.

Please be a Neffex reference. Please be a Neffex reference. Please be a Neffex reference.

“Yes, just remember that if you find a tarantula, her name’s Betty and she’s more scared of you than you’re of her.”

My cousin Little John had a tarantula named Homer.
Believe it or not he wasn't a Simpsons fan. He just really liked the Odyssey.

“Wait,” Lyra said, “You have a daughter, so how those plants could–”

The Black Cherry Lyra. The Black Cherry.

“Actually, they said ‘can’t you knock?’” Long Play muttered. Vinyl looked at him, dumbfounded.

...at least they said something mine just threw something at Little John when they made me.

“I’d rather call it ‘pissing contest’, but we can agree on ‘family feud’, if you like,” Bon Bon replied.

Those two guys are still on a list.

You’re entering the grounds of Long Play the Cruel. Repo ponies, peddlers, secret agents and aliens will be shot and sold to Griffonian restaurants. If you’re one of those thirteen runty folk metal fans – I’m not going for any adventure with you! Have a nice day.

Aliens as in from space or immigrants? There's a really big difference.

“Yes, just remember that if you find a tarantula, her name’s Betty and she’s more scared of you than you’re of her.”

...I miss Homer.

“Ugh, don’t remind me…” Long Play shuddered. “It’s official: there were no prequels or sequels to this movie. Whoever mentions one, drinks five times.”

The prequels were alright.

“Hmm, Long Play, do you want to buy a table? I can give you my blender for free.”

Nah bruh...just burn that shit.

“ And I don’t think she invited Berry for a ride, unless I missed the sound of Tartarus freezing over.”

I mean... technically the ninth circle is frozen already frozen.