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Yes! It's finally out, I've been admittedly excited for this ever since you brought it up last week.
This is wonderful. :3
I'm interested to see how this will do.
While I can't say this is the best clopfic I've ever read, it certainly isn't the worst. The only thing I should say about this is there wasn't a whole lot of 'backbone' to the story, so to speak. But I guess that's what one-shot clop is about these days.
Clop? You're pushing boundaries and blowing ny mind!
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So am I
I like how it looks.
though you may consider tagging for 'Lyra'.
one way or the other.
just one character, and another mentioned in description.
some of the words seems off and distracting.
'Off' is not cappitalised?
Otherwise, the story feels enjoyable.
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As she was only mentioned briefly in the story, no.
Character tags are for ponies the story is about, not just ponies that have a brief appearance or mention.
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Over 200 views on the first day, and it's still far short of 24 hours...
Not bad.
I've had stories that have done worse.
I'm betting this one is destined for at least 1000 views, eventually.
(In my experience, clopfics tend to accrue views over a much longer time period than non-clop fics.)
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I'm so happy! I was refreshing the page all day!... besides when i was at the movies watching Robo Cop 
that was my break.
I know
3963864 if she wasn't actually in the story, I guess it makes sense,
just that it looks empty with just a single character.(in my oppinion)
Wow, 200 in the first day? that's great.
I'd imagine you'll get new views for chapters down the line, not just the first on publication, though.
my 'best' is just over 350 views at this time, not sure how far it will go.
oups, some poni just viewed the story.
That was nice. I only masturbated once.
I like the detail of the clop in this story it's pretty good and quite descriptive.
Although
Some things I would have like to have seen was more of Bon Bon's thoughts/emotions/feelings, such as in depth description of her first orgasm, like exactly how it felt and what was going through her head.The thoughts in clop make me...uhh... I'm not going there but you get my drift.
Have a thumbs up.
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Thank you again for reading, it meant allot for me.
Thank you Chiami, I will be sure to add more detail next time. i'm planning on writing a sequel here in the near future. It will be of Bon Bon and Lyra
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Ooh...
I love Lyra Bon
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If you have the time, would you like to collab this story?
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I'm unsure if I have the time.
I'm writing two stories at once at the moment. When do you plan on writing it? I might have time later.
I've never done collab before lol.
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Neither have I, and I plan on working on it in the next few months. Will you have time then?
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So long as I stay on track. I don't see why not.
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Yay!, do you want to hear what kinds of ideas i have for it? I want to discus it in PM though.
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Sure!
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That was pretty good. It seems to me that sex ed classes ought to teach girls about ways to pleasure themselves so they'll have an idea of what feels good to them the first time they actually have sex with someone else. With men there's no problem, and very little shame. With women though, it's seen as dirty. I actually think more girls should lose their virginity to hairbrushes or carrots or whatever they have.
Just the quick Clop I needed
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