After spending a drunken night with Rainbow Dash, Ryan heads back to work at a small Candyshop in the center of Ponyville. But little does he know the one night stand quickly proves to be a little more involved.
Man Ryan just can't get a break can he?? A man trapped between two mares, one an emotional cripple whereas the other is probably the most well balanced mare in Ponyville. Damn that shit must suck so bad!!
4584776 Well gentlemen, I believe we have just been stereotyped. The only way to deal with something like this is to get some beer, brawts, and seven layer dip, gather on the couch with our jerseys and play some good ol' fantasy hoofball.
Just so you know, I am a man. And when it comes to women, we men know next to feck all about them. You think you do but it's all just an illusion, the complex plan that is the female logic
well all know this needs to end with happy dash loving. She's in the cover art ffs! Besides, this chapter plainly shows that Bon-Bon is a straight up racist. We don't take kindly ta dem folks round dese parts.
I start to whis him to be together with Rainbow Dash, but i think i would prefer it if the scene in the shop woul be not the only reason for him to love her. I am not sure, but either he start to like Rainbow or he is going to be sick right now.
I also don´t completly understand why he isn´t even trying to search confort in Bon Bon´s Hoofs.
I really like the story, it shows a somehow weak Rainbow Dash for a change. I just hope if he start to love her, that Rainbow doesn´t start to make him begging for it, because well only she was after him three months not he after her. Or at least let Twilight or Fluttershy showing Rainbow her own mistakes. Ahhh i think i just start thinking how this could be make perfect.
I love the way this story flows. You know exactly when to be funny and joke around, and then you know when to make it serious and emotional. It's always gradual, and you never feel as if the story suddenly changed. Great work, man. Keep it up.
Things may have gotten awkward, but at least he gets to sleep in a real house. That's the only positive thing I can think of. I feel like this will cause some problems, with the mane six.
So many feels. Can't stop shedding liquid feels. I want to pity Ryan, feel bad for RD, and be a little mad at Bon Bon for being insensitive, but also want to comfort both RD and Ryan, and back up Bon Bon because she's technically right.
4584776 That normally only happens to me in a rts video game when half my base gets devastated before I can count to ten. I freeze up and watch complete destruction unfold. Then feel like an idiot afterward.
Great chapter! I like the way he can't figure everything out, kind of like how men in reality can't handle an awkward situation.
Keep going, thumbs up again.
Man Ryan just can't get a break can he??
A man trapped between two mares, one an emotional cripple whereas the other is probably the most well balanced mare in Ponyville.
Damn that shit must suck so bad!!
I demand so much more of this I will cry every moment this isn't updated. You have been warned
Damn, things got all deep and shit. Now I feel bad at laughing at Rainbow's antics earlier
You sir (hat) have received a like and a save. Carry on with the good work.
4584776 Well gentlemen, I believe we have just been stereotyped. The only way to deal with something like this is to get some beer, brawts, and seven layer dip, gather on the couch with our jerseys and play some good ol' fantasy hoofball.
NEXT CHAPTER: Go to Rainbow Dash and play Baby Come Back
ouch. that went strait to the feelz.
Poor Dash!
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Just so you know, I am a man. And when it comes to women, we men know next to feck all about them. You think you do but it's all just an illusion, the complex plan that is the female logic
well all know this needs to end with happy dash loving. She's in the cover art ffs! Besides, this chapter plainly shows that Bon-Bon is a straight up racist. We don't take kindly ta dem folks round dese parts.
4588467 One million years, dungeon!
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Racist, Bon Bon? No, Aryanne is racist, and she's next.
Holy crap that was intense
I love it
Now, I'm sad, cuz scince sir hat has so many stories that still need to be updated, the next chapter of this may not be coming out for a WHILE
I start to whis him to be together with Rainbow Dash, but i think i would prefer it if the scene in the shop woul be not the only reason for him to love her.
I am not sure, but either he start to like Rainbow or he is going to be sick right now.
I also don´t completly understand why he isn´t even trying to search confort in Bon Bon´s Hoofs.
I really like the story, it shows a somehow weak Rainbow Dash for a change. I just hope if he start to love her, that Rainbow doesn´t start to make him begging for it, because well only she was after him three months not he after her. Or at least let Twilight or Fluttershy showing Rainbow her own mistakes.
Ahhh i think i just start thinking how this could be make perfect.
I love the way this story flows. You know exactly when to be funny and joke around, and then you know when to make it serious and emotional. It's always gradual, and you never feel as if the story suddenly changed.
Great work, man. Keep it up.
Sweet shit, that hit hard. Rough going for Dash indeed. You've got me biting my fingernails for the next chapter now. Hyuk.
Emotions are too much for me to handle as of this moment. I have not slept in over 30 hours and I have a caffeine hangover. That honestly got to me.
Things may have gotten awkward, but at least he gets to sleep in a real house. That's the only positive thing I can think of.
I feel like this will cause some problems, with the mane six.
Sir Hat. This chapter tore my chest open and forced my heart down my throat. When will there be another chapter for this story?
Well that as several levels of awkward one after the other.
So many feels. Can't stop shedding liquid feels. I want to pity Ryan, feel bad for RD, and be a little mad at Bon Bon for being insensitive, but also want to comfort both RD and Ryan, and back up Bon Bon because she's technically right.
This chapter just made me sadpurr Rainbow dash.
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That normally only happens to me in a rts video game when half my base gets devastated before I can count to ten. I freeze up and watch complete destruction unfold.
Then feel like an idiot afterward.
The couch always wins.
I dont want to stop but I hafta get up early tomorrow.