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ShootingRainbowStar13


I want to share my work with others who will appreciate it.

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Pinkie Pie is born to make people smile. It's in her nature.

So after a few strange beings ended up in Equestria, and she got to know Shadow - the serene and lonely Hedgehog - she immediately began trying to make him happy. But so far, it hasn't been working. She's tried everything, but he just doesn't seem to be a sociable guy.

She has already learnt her lesson, thanks to Cranky Doodle. She can't just pester Shadow in an attempt to make him crack a grin. Instead, she has to find out what had turned him into such an introvert. So she decides to throw him a huge, blowout surprise party for him on Hearts and Hooves day.

But she has barely scratched the surface of Shadow's dark history. Little does she know of the things in store for her that particular Hearts and Hooves.

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Comments ( 54 )

I'm not really a huge fan of crossovers, but screw it. I'll read it

It was short but sweet, and right before I went to sleep too.:pinkiehappy:

Sweet little story you have here. I definitely liked your portrayal of Shadow if he were to end up in Equestia. Would have liked to have seen some more reaction from Sonic and the gang after Shadow's blow up but beggars can't be choosers. :applejackunsure:

I've always found Pinkie and Shadow to be a pretty even match for each other. Then again, Pinkie Pie can become quite determined when it comes to befriending people. :pinkiehappy:

3941965 Hi again! By the way, I read your story, and I have to admit, I actually liked it. Which is really surprising because I normally hate crossovers.

Should I read Chaos and Harmony - Crossing Paths before this?

Just a random thought, but does anyone else like the new sonic's look?(from Sonic Boom)

Ausgezeichnet.:pinkiehappy: Keep up the good work.

Sehr geehrter Herr!:pinkiegasp: This is fantastic!

Oh meine Sterne und StrumpfbΓ€nder! Awesome story!

3949276 Nah. That's not related to this story. But you can read it if you want.. :twilightsmile:

3949281 Everything is okay for me... 'cept the blue arms. They just don't look right. :ajbemused:

3995288 I know right! Although I like the sports tape and scarf...

You know those moments where you thought it was gonna be terrible but it turned out to be one of the best things you've ever seen, this is one of those moments. Keep up the good work! :raritywink:

The Guardian Unit of Nations. They found out what was happening. They realized what a danger I could be. So they attacked the ARK. Maria... she tried to protect me. She knew they would do horrible things to me if they caught me. So she put me in a capsule against my will. She was going to send me off into deep space, in the hope that I would reach the earth.

Are you talking about the Sonic the Hedgehog version, the sonic X version or a version that you made up?
If it was the first two, Maria was suppost to get into the pod with Shadow and she was shot on site (except the Sonic X version. They said they knocked her out and took her away, never to be seen again. Never trust Sega with cute young girls as they always kill them off.).

Wait I didn't know Shadow loves Luna in Chaos and Harmony crossing paths.
IM SO LOST :derpyderp2:

OMG! :pinkiegasp: YOU MADE ME COME BACK TO IT A SECOND TIME! THIS STORY IS AMAZING!:rainbowkiss:

I can just imagine Shadow with his red aura around him when he was mad.

KAIO KEIN!!!!!:flutterrage:

normally i donΒ΄t like that short storys, but well i think i will give it a try.

Yo! Is it alright if I review this?

4242606 Well, I read Maria's wiki and that's what I got. Sorry if you don't think it's right! :applejackunsure:

4431053 I don't know! :derpytongue2: I thought I might make something between Shadow and Luna in CaHCP (this will be the new nickname!) But I felt like writing one for Pinkie and Shadow. It's a spur of the moment thing!

5004431 I know I've taken an age to answer this, and I don't know what's happened, but you can go ahead I guess! Just be sure to credit me~! :twilightsmile:

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I don't mind that it's not right, the real point is that on every time we see the Ark its always facing the Earth, as it is an orbital station after all. The real problem is that one does not simply launch a pod into deep space and expect it to come back to Earth. Depending on which part of the Ark the pod was launched from, Shadow might as well have been dreaming that he even met sonic as his real body might as well be crushed from the gravity of Jupiter. Good story though. Here's a comment from IGN: "Why do we even review anymore. 420/10-IGN.

ayyy it's 2015 but nice story so far!

Oh... so thats the girl in the cover.

Awesome story! So cute at the end :3

Man I think that this is my third read. I'm inspired! I'm writing a Sonic crossover! Let's hope it doesn't suck majorly! :yay:

Y'know, after reading this gem of a story, I feel that you are a writer who truly deserves recognition. Your writing style is so excellent and well-crafted. The grammer is flawless, the pacing is just right, the characterization is spot on and they feel very accurate to their source material, the development is beautiful, and the dialogue is fantastic. I suppose if I were to criticize it for anything it's that it feels a little on the basic side and it's not the most original story I've ever read, but then again I could be nitpicking here and it doesn't detract from the quality of the story too much in my eyes. This really is one of the best stories I have read on this site and I don't often say that. Bravo man! Bravo!

By the way, I'm about to do a fanfic read soon on this.

Here is part 1 of the fanfic read.

Here is part 2 of the fanfic read! I hope you enjoy it! :pinkiehappy:

My feels! :fluttercry: I feel bad for shadow! :raritycry: Poor shadow.

No make shadow upset or he reck u party:twilightsheepish:

Beutiful!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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