A Captain of the United Gilbret Federation is stuck in world where is Ponies are the master and humans are nothing but savage and tamed animals. Well not if this Captain has something to say about it.
Holy anal ass-splosions! That was mildly amusing! You weren't lying about being rusty. This needs some work, but fuck me with a hotwheels if I didn't like the way you crammed so much information into one chapter. Keep yo dick at half mast though, this may have been good but buy some Armour-All fo dat rust and some deo fo yo must.
The reason I hate old monarchies (other than Queen Elisabeth II, god bless her soul) is because they are so backwards thinking and only exist to serve themselves, not the people/ponies (99% of the time, there have been honest queens and kings.). And when things don't go their way or if their power is threatened, they would kill, imprison, rape and kidnap/ponynap the source like the selfish bastards they are.
5610071 An Ion Cannon vs. the Elements of Harmony, I'm putting my credits on the Ion Cannon. The world's best satellite-based weapon we might have in the future, I hope so.
VIVA REVLOSHEN BITCHES
4209962 b.vimeocdn.com/ts/148/609/148609972_640.jpg I could not have said it better my self.
Can't wait for more!!!! post quickly please!
I hope that humans get their freedom and not one of those stories where humans are defeated
This story promises much
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Viva La Revolution
I can spell check for you.
"if we use the elements of harmony along with mine and Luna powers we might able to hold them off"
Yeah no. I doubt magic can withstand a nuke.
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Please do.
And send me something
4213024 Ill have it bacm toy you later today, mabey tomorrow but that's unlikely.
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mmkay
Holy anal ass-splosions! That was mildly amusing!
You weren't lying about being rusty. This needs some work, but fuck me with a hotwheels if I didn't like the way you crammed so much information into one chapter.
Keep yo dick at half mast though, this may have been good but buy some Armour-All fo dat rust and some deo fo yo must.
Translation: work harder
Question, will you accept any OC's?
And, love this chapter, please continue.
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Well.
In a few chapters(hint hint spoilers)
There's going to be a reinforcement team sent in to help lenning.
4 man team called 'Spectre'
there in FRINGE just like Lenning.
If you have any human OC please send me a PM describing them.
The reason I hate old monarchies (other than Queen Elisabeth II, god bless her soul) is because they are so backwards thinking and only exist to serve themselves, not the people/ponies (99% of the time, there have been honest queens and kings.). And when things don't go their way or if their power is threatened, they would kill, imprison, rape and kidnap/ponynap the source like the selfish bastards they are.
there is more then one equipment apparently
Did you say... Ion cannon?
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FIRE AWAY!!!
5610071 An Ion Cannon vs. the Elements of Harmony, I'm putting my credits on the Ion Cannon. The world's best satellite-based weapon we might have in the future, I hope so.
"Are you a human or a pony?" Asked Lenning.
"Human, You to?"
"Yeah I'm human what so important about that?" Replied Lenning.
Why, oh why would Lenning ask that question when he asked it in the first place?
This story as a good idea but the way it is written makes it hard to enjoy, I'll check back later to see if its any better.
4209962 You stole my words 75w, 1d before me.
~T.CC
murder them all
5610071 Fire the Giant Boob Nipple Gun
7356411 Roger what targets are Marked for Death
ππthat would be a HUGE mistake, one doesn't report back, more will follow, with a team, then an army, then the human raceππππ